New Racing Story

[One_Ball_Hung_Low]

Well here is a tentative car list. First three characters and BRIEF descriptions. As far as the cars go, my story will pay alotof attention to what the driver does to their car and how they use it and/or abuse it. Also the people behind(inside) the cars will be getting a different aspect as their ambitions are clear enough and effect their actions, racing styles, and car choice. You can almost guess what kind of car each guy wants to move on to just by seeing where they want to be in life.


Mark-1994 Toyota Celica GT-4.
Main character. True devoted car enthusiast. Wants nothing more than to race, possibly F1 but more favorably WRC. Loves 4-wheel drive cars, and has had his GT-4 since he got his liscense. When it comes to racing, he's really unpredictable.

Al-1998 Nissan 240SX w/SR20DET
Major Character. Really only pays attention to the street scene.Wants to open tuning shop. Enjoys flaunting his speed.

Michael-1998 Nissan 240SX w/KA24-T
Major Character. Al's best friend. Really prefers much more of a sleeper look. He also has a much wider view of tuing than anyone else. Wants to be a pro driver of some kind.

[youngvr4]

so were are you going with this? it sounds interesting

but when and were is the story?

[-The Stig-]

a fictional story eh?

[AWP9521]

Hmm, so far we got a main character, 2 major charactors, 3 cars, no race, no plot, and NO GIRL? Who gets da girl?

[AlienEvolution]

haha sounds like it has potential, go for it man!

[chexmixa]

Lol, i am already interested just on what lil i have read from the character description

[Zwrangler]

could he have possibly maybe forgotten to write about the race after he wrote all those character descriptions?

[Underground_Killah]

possibly.. an what's up with the 240sx? why no 300's?!?

[CivRacer95]

You forgot the Best Character:

CivRacer: 1995 Honda Civic EX Coupe
Too much for the other 3. They envy him day in and day out. They are no match for him . Celica GT-What? SR20 Huh? KA Doesn't Matter-T. They are still in envy of the SOHC tightly packed under the hood of his Civic. . Late...

[Ace$nyper]

good umm well i can't say story cause there isn't one so um yea..... *thinks of somthing nice to say*

kick ass shoes dude are they pumas?

[GardenSnake02]

good.. are u going to make a movie too? an underground movie..lol..you could prob make some nice $$

[DetroitMuscle15]

hey what me

Pat-1998 Ford Mustang
The head honcho/The Big Boss
His unpredictable moves while racing his 3.8L fuel-injected yellow Mustang is enough to grant him many triumphant victories over his 4-cyl brethan. Known to have a rare case of bullshittitus...Bitter rivals with the bastid officially known as Dampachi, And Offical leader of NSR who seek global domination of the streets

[want a supra]

I'd like to see more than 3 characters, and I'd like to see were its going. But thats just me, good start.

[youngvr4]

Originally Posted by DetroitMuscle15

hey what me

Pat-1998 Ford Mustang
The head honcho/The Big Boss
His unpredictable moves while racing his 3.8L fuel-injected yellow Mustang is enough to grant him many triumphant victories over his 4-cyl brethan. Known to have a rare case of bullshittitus...Bitter rivals with the bastid officially known as Dampachi, And Offical leader of NSR who seek global domination of the streets

i love this kid

[One_Ball_Hung_Low]

Those were just the first three characters, and im building the story up bit by bit. firsty i want to have people and cars to with them.
More characters.

Ashley-2003 BMW M3
Major Character. Will drive/race anything fast that she can get her hands on. Loves BMW's a lot and a true beliver of German Engineering Superiority.

Justin-1985 Mazda RX-7
Major Character-Mark's Father. A true technical driver and loves a difficult road to drive on. He causes drivers to make mistakes by his pestering pass attempts. Only wants his son to evolve into a better driver and person.

Rachael-2004 Dodge Neon SRT-4
Major Character-A lover of "Detroit Muscle" with respect for the import scene becase she realizes she basically drives one. Is always ready to challenge Mark and shares his dream to be a F1 driver.

Okay, the story takes place in a made up city in California i call "Pacific City". It has a down town area, a mountain area, behing the mountain in the desert there is a race complex with 1/4 and a full racing course ,and before you get to the mountain there is a backwoods area. I thought these 3 areas would be perfect for all sorts of racing and diverse cars.