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Old 03-30-2004, 04:30 PM
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This quick side-view sketch took me about 15mins including the render. I just want comments on how the design is and if the redering was done correctly (This is my first try at rendering with markers). Anyways, any comments will be greatful so i could improve on my mistakes next time.
BTW sorry about the quality.



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Old 03-30-2004, 04:59 PM
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Re: Plz look and crit...

not bad!the design is good, maybe a little too much bend on the side paneling. some extra tire would be a little more realistic if your going for that. but hey, i think its awesome
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Old 03-30-2004, 05:16 PM
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Thanx acoustic, the wheels are a bit messed up, they were like the last things i did but now i know without good looking rims the sketch goes down in quality. keep them coming

Thanx again acoustic
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Re: Plz look and crit...

the speed lines off the back are a nice touch, but according to the wheels, the car isnt moving. Its a bit confusing ya know? But i like the design, and good marker usage
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Re: Plz look and crit...

It is a very good rendering but it appears as though the car is a bit long with the seat position that far back.
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I like the over all design , the only thing I would change is to make the roof a bit taller and more curved .
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i agree that it does curve up a lot in the middle. I also thank that it is great. good job. add some vents or scoops it would look cool if it was kinda more exotic.
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Re: Plz look and crit...

Thanx for all your comments, they were very much appriated. I might be doing a front/sideiew of this design, so stay tuned.

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