New newbie W.I.P

[Pukutukas]

Hi. I'm gonna draw Mitsu Evo 9.
Please crit and say opinion about my proportions quickly because I'm gonna change bad places. There you go:
(Yo drawing pros like Rexin comment please)

[GirlBear]

oh, nice start! keep us up to date.

[Blip]

Looks like a good start with your initial sketching.

[Pukutukas]

Damn i did a foul.
Proportions are not very good.
.. Do you think i need finish this crap?

[rexsins-art]

thats ok dont panic its a very good start look at the side skirt(rocker) panel and the bottom of the window line they both need to go up on an angle more because if you look at the back of the car that is the angle its on ,also make it a little shorter its a touch too long to be an EVO ,im hoping this helps you not discourage you ,thats is not my intention ,you can always transfer(trace) the good area onto another sheet and start over theres no shame in doing this.

You have talent you just need to be patient

[Pukutukas]

Hi. Is it better? I erased all ass and changed some of side parts. I drew it not very nice because i want to know is my proportions better ? Thanks for answers

[rexsins-art]

yes ,you learn fast its looking good ,i would still make it a touch shorter overall and make the rear bumper near the wheel follow the line of the side skirt and window line aswell ,but overall its starting to look very good mate ,good stuff

[Pukutukas]

I'm going to finish it with colorful pencils.

[Blip]

Rexsin has given you some good advice, he's got a great "eye" and
hand for doing pencil rendering.

Got nothing else to add, but to keep practicing.
I try to learn something from every one of my doodles.

[kris]

I would say even if it does not turn out perfect the first time, it shows you are human. Keep practicing.

[Pukutukas]

Thanks For all for godo words. This is my some of colours. (refs )

[rexsins-art]

very nice ,the shading is looking really good ,this one will turn out nice

[Pukutukas]

Gonna finish it soon. Thanks Rexsin for Your comments. I'm learning from you.

[sketchmaster]

Very nice, looking forward to seeing this piece finished...

[Pukutukas]