Veloce GT

[nicecar]

What do you think? sorry about the bad img quality, bad lighting and shaky hands

-chris-

[sketchmaster]

Ok, i'm not a cardesigner but i'm going to say what I think is wrong in my eyes,.
*Back rim work on the elipse and the rim design, looks a little bit wrong?
the front rim is pretty good maybe allittle work on the elipse.
and the rest of the car is pretty good ...
One thing ... i see that you draw your cars the same style everythime i think it looks like a straight line under the car, what i wan't to say is try another style ....
SKETCH

[off the edge]

Originally Posted by sketchmaster

Ok, i'm not a cardesigner but i'm going to say what I think is wrong in my eyes,.
*Back rim work on the elipse and the rim design, looks a little bit wrong?
the front rim is pretty good maybe allittle work on the elipse.
and the rest of the car is pretty good ...
One thing ... i see that you draw your cars the same style everythime i think it looks like a straight line under the car, what i wan't to say is try another style ....
SKETCH

i agree with you.

[Dx_king91]

Well I agree, the rim need some work
But I think the design is kool , keep your style and just try to Improve it with some more detail

see I change some few detail and it still my style

[drunken monkey]

I think some of you might not quite understand the difference between "style" and "design" and perhaps this is just because you are young and well, inexperienced in this particular field; you don't quite understand the design process. I mean no offence to you or what you are doing but it looks to me that you are more tweaking that same design rather than making a new design altogether. It doesn't help that you present your things in the exact same way each time.

If I may be so bold as to make a few requests
(let's just pretend for a moment that you are a design student and I am your tutor).

I want to see:
plan view
elevations: front + rear +side
a front 3/4 from 2m high
a rear 3/4 from 2m high
front view from 2m high
rear view from 2m high
some detail sketches/drawings of individual elements maybe - lights, mirrors, anything that you want to highlight.
If you know what goes underneath a car's skin, can you show how you've arranged the package?

Also, don't just draw it; think about the layout of each drawing.
All elevations together?
Put an elevation as a "sub" object on a more interesting drawing (i.e the 3/4 views)?
How you present each page is just as important the drawings and the ideas themselves. Often, you won't be there to explain your drawings and your process so everything you do will have to tell its own story.

Some things for you to think about.

[nicecar]

Originally Posted by drunken monkey

I think some of you might not quite understand the difference between "style" and "design" and perhaps this is just because you are young and well, inexperienced in this particular field; you don't quite understand the design process. I mean no offence to you or what you are doing but it looks to me that you are more tweaking that same design rather than making a new design altogether. It doesn't help that you present your things in the exact same way each time.

If I may be so bold as to make a few requests
(let's just pretend for a moment that you are a design student and I am your tutor).

I want to see:
plan view
elevations: front + rear +side
a front 3/4 from 2m high
a rear 3/4 from 2m high
front view from 2m high
rear view from 2m high
some detail sketches/drawings of individual elements maybe - lights, mirrors, anything that you want to highlight.
If you know what goes underneath a car's skin, can you show how you've arranged the package?

Also, don't just draw it; think about the layout of each drawing.
All elevations together?
Put an elevation as a "sub" object on a more interesting drawing (i.e the 3/4 views)?
How you present each page is just as important the drawings and the ideas themselves. Often, you won't be there to explain your drawings and your process so everything you do will have to tell its own story.

Some things for you to think about.

I have to say i agree completely, my "designs" are basically just improving the same car rather than creating a totally new one. I guess, being my age, I dont really have experience of what my *style* is, and how what i draw like would look like based on other cars.

I have to say, i struggled a lot in the supercar design contest, as i had to change a lot of my design.

Thanks guys, im gonna do some new perspectives and try aout a few more deigns, and if you could help me out and tell me what is wrong, that would much be apreciated.

Thanks
-Chris-

[model_citizen]

I like it. Of course, the comments left on my posts haven't been the best. Maybe I just suck. Anyway, I like it!