My Dodge Viper

[Dx_king91]

My Dodge Viper sorry for the writing i'm kinda make a mistake there sorry

[Dx_king91]

Hope you guy like it this is the "Happy Birth Day To Me" car

[knightvision]

ok...

a few tips:

technique
- your car looks a bit flat, you can make it pop out by making the playing around with the perspective, especially with vanishing points closer to each other.

contrast:
- add tires to the rims
- add a dark background behind the spokes so that they pop out
- increase the shading/reflection on the windows

design:
- the Dodge Viper is a design classic, one of the automotive design masterpieces of the 90s. It's hard to redesign this, and imo, they already failed at the 2nd generation.
- I know big wheels look great, but yours are oversized. It's like with women - monster titties just look sick and retarded and they are also unpractical.
-watch out for overhangs, especially at the rear. The initial Viper has a beautiful tail which sets a fluent end to the cars design theme. Your rear overhang is very short, which doesn't really fit the Viper.
- in general, I'd take a closer look at the Viper. Explore it's design, analyze it's key design lines, probortions surfaces and so on. I can already see that you installed the sidepipes and some kind of Dodge-cross-grill.

post:
- I have a 17" monitor and I can hardly see the half of the car. I think it's very important to see the car as a whole, so it would be better if you would scale it to some 1024x768 size so that it fits a standard screen size.

However, this is my personal opinion, of course it must not be right. I want this to be constructive critisism. I'd really like to see another design from you. Have fun, keep it up!

[Dx_king91]

yeah thanks for the tip man but it just my way of design you don't need to draw tires focus on the rim and i try to resize it and thanks a lot for the tip

[thyd88]

Cool man. I think u r getting familiar with the presentation that is usually done by pro. I'm not a pro but I've seen most pro presented their works in such manner..front perspective and rear perspective.. cool! Ur imagination is good. keep up the good work.

[Dx_king91]

thank man

[GirlBear]

its cool. a bit long but still cool.