just a 10 min sketch.....

[<<Si-Vtec>>]

[bonzelite]

work on spokes, they're not equidistant.

work on body width to front fascia width: windshield, thus body, is WAY too narrow.

work on diminshing perspective in 2 points.

i say this because the drawing is actually pretty good. your ellipses are really great. and you seem to understand accurate depiction of form by using lines. you understand realism brought to sketching.

tweak these things i mention. maybe do a tracing and compare the two.

[An Angry Clown]

man, i dont know how you guys do it!

mine just look like crap

[Telos]

I'd have to say that the windshield isn't wide enough. Looks pretty good otherwise.

[An Angry Clown]

Originally Posted by Telos

I'd have to say that the windshield isn't wide enough. Looks pretty good otherwise.

its a chop top

[<<Si-Vtec>>]

i think iam gonna do a seacond skeatch and fix what u said and then i'll post and update here.......

[DP_Design]

I know the problem. I used to get this too.

The perspective on the front looks off. Your showing too much of the front end, there should be some hidden features due to the perspective (does that make sense)

Otherwise its not a bad sketch

[hdesign]

I just had a couple suggestions...good sketch overall.

[G-man422]

I cant wait to see it when you're done.

[JDMWong]

Over all looks great for 10 minutes. Nothing to say that someone hasnt looks good.