New sportscar design.

[DP_Design]

Hey guys! hows it goin? long time no see. Here's a render ive been working on on and off this week. I thought i'd go for a different type of render, what do you think?

[<<Si-Vtec>>]

it looks very good!!! the color is very good i like it...

a few things...
the front window line looks a bit off , the upper line dosent match the hood line or the downer line of the window, fix that and it will look batter.

did u use pastels???

[DP_Design]

Thanks mate! maybe your right about the window, better luck next time i guess. I used marker and graphite pencil for the car, it was a bit of a gamble but i think it worked.

[<<Si-Vtec>>]

thats a graphite pencil!!!!!!???? :s
but it looks brown... :s
did u smudge after color with pencil?

[DP_Design]

I just smoothed it down with a tissue.

[stuffbyalex]

Nice design and rendering! The brown/umber tinge looks kind of cool, actually. I would darken some of the pencil just a little bit.


Here's what might be throwing the windshield off a bit:



Alex

[energon]

What the... I commented on this, but it seems to have disapeared. I think it looks great. stuffbyalex hit the nail on the head as far as the roof/windsheild goes. Other than that I love this design. Looks like the return of baby moons!!

[bonzelite]

...what alex said.

hello, alex. remember me?

[DP_Design]

Thanks for the comments guys!! Hey alex, i see what you mean about the roof. Thanks for doin that

[KustmAce]

Originally Posted by energon

What the... I commented on this, but it seems to have disapeared. I think it looks great. stuffbyalex hit the nail on the head as far as the roof/windsheild goes. Other than that I love this design. Looks like the return of baby moons!!

Nothing disappeared. There have been no deleted posts or moderator edits in this thread.

[knightvision]

I also like your design, like I already said on MSn, though there are some problems with perspective and linework. One thing's the windshield/roof secction Alex mentioned. Also, the co-drivers door is going down too low at the a pillar. I t could be a hard reflection, but I guess that was not your intention.

Maybe, in the future, you could vary your linewight a bit. you could make some lines more bold. Therefore, look at cars and check where there are only small gaps and where are bigger gaps between the different parts.

Originally Posted by bonzelite

...what alex said.

hello, alex. remember me?

BONZ IS BACK!!! I already thought you'll never return! Welcome back!

[energon]

Originally Posted by KustmAce

Nothing disappeared. There have been no deleted posts or moderator edits in this thread.

Hmmmm.... I guess I just must have forgotten to push the submit reply, button. Oh well.

[HighOctaneNOSUser]

Originally Posted by bonzelite

...what alex said.

hello, alex. remember me?

Yes I do

Just remember who was here first. And HOLY SHIT BONZ IS BACK! Yay!

BTW, Concept looks good but SBA hit it right on the mark.

[bonzelite]

thanks you guys for warm re-welcome. i am back.

[stuffbyalex]

Bonz, great to have you back! we all missed ya