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When the U.S. invaded Mexico June 18, 2009 many Americans did

not approve of the plan. Many young men and women had to serve their

country to help fight the radicals in control of Mexico. Andre Viscouer the

leader of the Mexican revolution is trying to get nuclear power in their

hands and to ultimately dominate the world, as we know it. An elite squad

of U.S. Army also known as the (Delta Force) were sent in for a couple

of reconnaissance missions deep into the heart of Mexico. While on these

mission they encountered numerous mortar attacks on there squads. They

were fortunate enough to not suffer any fatalities



Team Bravo was outside the south entrance of the Red Zone waiting

for the word to infiltrate from team Charlie. Charlie yelled in a

nervous voice, “The mission is comprised I repeat the mission is comprised

get over here and help us.” Bravo heard a big explosion and the radio went

dead. “Charlie, Charlie are you there? If you can hear us please reply. First

Lieutenant Jordan Ryan said, “Sir I think I found something, I think it is a

sewer entrance.” As General David Erb walks over to look shots rang out

from all around them. David yells, “Everyone down in the hole.” As soon as

everyone was down in the hole Private Travis Hummel and Jordan Blocked

the entry from letting the enemies in the sewer with them. Bravo turned

around and started walking deeper into the tunnel. Jordan yelled out, “ Sir I

think were going to have to fight this one out they probably know these

tunnels like the back of there hands.” David Replied, “I guess so everyone in

your positions two on each tunnel. Any Roaches come around the corner

give them two in the chest and one in the head!” Then one by one some

roaches came running around the corner and every single on was shot.


After about two hours of fighting they moved from where the roaches

were coming when they weren’t coming from the outside entrance.

They followed the tunnel for about two and a half miles and they came to an

open entrance into a building where they thought they heard Americans

talking, Jordan stuck his head up to see that it was. Jordan yelled whispered,

“Charlie is that you?” “Hey who is that?” “Its bravo sir.” Jordan replied.

“Boy its good to see you guys we thought you were dead.” “Those roaches

are lucky they caught us off guard.” Replied Charlie. “Where’s your

commander?” “I’m right here.” David replied in a stern voice. “How are you

guys?” “I think were alright we need to be un tied though.” “Okay no

problem…. Where are your captors?” We don’t know they tied us up and

left.” Well Travis get up there and clear all the rooms Jordan you go with

him.” As they open the first door BANG someone starts shooting as they

shoot one of the terrorists. Travis moans. “Ah im shot.” Jordan soon says,

“Everything is clear sir.” “Okay lets find some weapons for you guys.”

“They have a room over in the left corner where they keep all of their

weapons I think.” Replied the commander of Charlie. “Wow look at this

stuff!” “This is amazing where did they get this?” “One thing for sure is im

glad we have it now.” “All right everyone I think we should stay here for the

night.” “Okay I need two guys from each team to stay guard.” Any takers?

“I will sir” Jordan answered. “Me to sir” Replied Mike Johnson. “Okay you

guys stay guard at the front on each corner and give cross fire to any roaches

coming down the street. If the situation gets to sticky everyone down in the

hole and cover it up with that rug.” “Now I need two of you from Charlie.”

Austin and I will Daniel replied. Okay you guys go to the back and do the

same, all four of you get m-60’s out of that room. Also I mean that if anyone

that isn’t an American soldier comes down the street shoot them.”


After about three hours of sleep Jordan and Mike start hearing some

talking coming from down the street. Jordan comes back inside to wake up

David. “What is it?” replied David. “Sir there are some people talking in

Spanish down the road do you want to go check it out?” Jordan answered.

“Yeah get me an suppressed mp5 and a couple of flash bangs and you cover

my back.” As David jumped the fence out front two of the rebel fighters run

across the road David yells, “We need a sniper to try and take them out.”

Daniel of Charlie team gets his M-4 and comes out front. “There over on the

north-east corner of the 4 houses down the road.” Daniel runs out with his

SA25 and kneels on one knee he pulls the trigger and it’s almost as if you

can see the bullets coming out the barrel. A two waves of heat fly towards

the two insurgents. The first one gets hit in the chest and starts screaming,

before the other has time to react the other bullet hits him in the head.

As David starts walking down the side of the houses the talking gets

louder and louder. He looks around the corner to see three elite rebels with

stolen m-16s. As David steps around the corner he steps on a stick and it

Snaps. The soldiers turn around and start shooting in his direction. David

tries and thinks of something to do so he grabs a flash bang and throws it

around the corner. They all just stood in a dazed look. As David turned the

corner to shoot them one of the Mexicans tries and grab his gun David

opened fire he hit the one trying to pick up his gun and finally kills the rest

of them. He comes back to the house and they all go back to

sleep. Next morning they wake up to the sound of a convoy of trucks driving

in the front of the house they were in. “Wow where are they going?” Asked

Jordan “Looks like a weapons shipment.” Replied Travis. “Well let’s go find

out.” David answered. “Everyone get your stuff lets go” When everyone

went back inside the sound of gunshots and explosions started going off.

“Hurry up lets go see what’s happening.”


As the two teams run to the next road they see some Mexicans trying

out their new weapons. “Charlie you try and flank them from the rear Jordan

and Travis you run across the road to the bombed out building I want one of

you on each story of the house we will give Charlie cover fire, when your

ready signal Jordan and then signal me.” David ordered during the gunfight

an armored bank truck speeds down the road to Travis’s position and

subdues him with a taser. As Jordan runs down the stairs one of the

insurgents shoot him in the head. “Jordan!” Yelled Austin “Are you

alright?” For about the five seconds we waited for an answer, it seemed as

an hour “Everyone get in the weapons truck and put Jordan in to.” David

yelled.


David asked Austin, “Does your radio still work?” “Yes sir” Austin

replied. “Okay I need you to call HQ and tell them we suffered a casualty

and they have an American P.O.W.” David ordered “ Sir a few seals

volunteered them selves to come out here and help us” Replied Austin

“Where’s the rendezvous point?” Questioned David “It is about 5 miles west

of your position you need to meet them in the old cemetery building, it is

rumored to be abandoned but be on your highest guard as which there is

quite a bit of movement around it.” Replied HQ “Okay thanks for the help

over and out.” Replied David “Everyone lets get ready to go” After a few

hours of walking they came to the square where the building was they

flashed a light over to the house and a light flashed back “Okay take position

under and give cover fire to the person behind you if needed, alright lets go.

Then one by one they got across to the building without any problems.


“This is a friendly reminder were not the only ones down here.”

Implied Mike “What are your names?” questioned David “Sir, John Smith

and Ryan Smith reporting for duty!” answered the two young men “Are you

guys brothers.” Questioned Mike “Yes we are.” Answered Ryan.” Okay we

had one of our men captured and HQ told us that that they have a video of

the insurgents with our man and threaten to kill him if we do not remove our

troops.” “HQ told the Mexican government that they withdrawal all of that

and us the insurgents are going to keep Travis for a while until they are sure

we are gone. So that means we have to be as covert as possible and keep out

of enemy radar.” “Austin call HQ and get the position on the insurgent

strong hold.” Ordered David “Sir.” Yelled Austin “HQ said that they think it

is about 2 miles south east of this position, and that we should go thru the

sewer system at 0900 hours” “But that’s in broad daylight” Complained

Mike “If we go thru the sewers most of the guards would be outside where

they wouldn’t see us.” Explained David “All we need is a silenced 22. So

it’s quiet enough.


The three teams left the church and got down into the sewer it was a

little confusing about how to find there way to the building. Once they got

there it was still a little dark. “John Ryan I want you two to make this
happen for me.” Ordered David. “Okay lets do it!” Excitedly answered John

There’s two entrances into the building one in the laundry room and one in

the bedroom. John you take the bathroom and Ryan you take the bedroom

Ryan get the hostage back into the sewer ASAP and the clear the house get a

gun for Travis from one of the terrorists. John wait for my signal until you

start to clear the house. All right lets go. Once they both got in the house you

could hear two little pops which were john shooting an insurgent in the

laundry room. “Oh my god, damnit!” Ryan yelled “Sir.” Asked Ryan “I

think you need to look at this.” Explained Ryan They beheaded Travis.”

“Well bring his body and head down here so we have it to take back.” David

ordered. After they secured the body of Travis they got his tags and

continued down the tunnel to the nearest opening.


Once they get to the opening there was someone surrounded by

security officers. The guy in the middle looked like Andre Viscouer “I’ll

throw a flash bang out there then lets take him captive.” Daniel suggested,

“Okay good idea, on the count of three One, Two, Three. Once they threw

the grenade out there and it exploded they were to dazed to know what hit

them. Mike and John ran out there shooting all of the guards they hear a

really loud shot out in the distance. A drunk Mexican sniper runs across the

road shooting his 30-06 and blew off Andre’s left arm. Daniel runs out there

to take out the sniper and a beat up Nissan pickup comes flying around the

corner wit a Mexican hanging out the window with an AK-47 shooting at the

teams. Daniel shoots a couple shots at the truck and kills the shooter and the

driver. He looks up to shoot the sniper but he is already around the corner.

“Sir I’m going after him.” Yelled Daniel, half way down the street. After

Kyle turns the corner there is about Thirty Mexican Revolution Soldiers

coming down the street. Daniel Turns around to yell for back up but the

sniper comes out of the door behind him and shoots him in the back blowing

a hole the size of a grapefruit in is Stomach.


John, Mike, David, and Austin Come running down the road with the

m-60s they got from the house they stayed in. They open fire on the group

coming down the road it is like shooting fish in a barrel row by row they

walked to there deaths The clinking of the 7.62 x 39mm shells hitting the

ground sounded like rain hitting the roof of a house they shot hundreds of

rounds killing every single on of the revolutionists. Afterwards it sounded

like a ghost town with nothing but the echo of gunshots off in the distance.

Once the four men returned to the two seals they had wrapped Andres arm to

stop the bleeding. Okay lets get him back to the rendezvous so they can get

him into custody. The three teams stayed in a rundown church 4 miles North

of the rendezvous point. It was a peaceful night, you couldn’t hear any

explosions or guns shots, it seamed as if the capture of Andre had calmed

down the Mexican people.


A static voice comes over the radio. “Charlie are you guys alright?

We just got video of Travis getting beheaded.” Murmured HQ. “We found

his body about three hours ago in the house they were keeping him.”

Replied Austin “We also have Andre!” Exclaimed Austin. “You guys are to

meet at the rendezvous in 4 hours”. HQ said. “We are about four miles away

from that point.” Replied Austin. “Shut up get down!” David yelled in a

quiet voice “Turn the radio off!” Right at that moment some roaches walk

past the window and knock on the door. “Ohla, ohla Yelled the insurgents. Is

anyone in here?” Speaking in Spanish that is all the teams could get out of it.

As the Americans got behind cover the Mexicans break down the door.

Right as the Mexicans turned there backs David got up with his 22. Shot

both of them in the head. “Damnit.” Yelled David “I hope there’s no more

around this building.” “Mike hide their bodies!” Ordered David. As Soon as

Mike walked over to their bodies another insurgent came running around the

corner David shot and missed but shot once more and hit him in the neck.

“Alright, Who here can speak fluent Spanish?” Questioned David. “Sir we

can.” Replied John and Ryan Okay I need you two to get in their uniforms

so we can take their truck and it wont be as suspicious.” David ordered.

After twenty minuets of driving they got to the rendezvous and dropped of

Andre to an American helicopter.


“HQ told me that is not Andre it is one of his look a likes.” Austin

told everyone. “Well I guess were going to have to break into his mansion.”

David explained. Outside Viscoure's strong hold there were many

insurgents guarding the entrances. “Which way do you guys vote on doing

this? Stealth under the cover of night or right now in the middle of the day?”

Questioned David? Of course most of the men voted for stealth. Once it

started getting dark they got in to the back of the truck that John and Ryan

drove. They got into the strong hold no problem and pulled into the loading

docks, which were luckily empty. All of the team got out of the truck and

made there way inside of the building. John and Ryan made there way

around the building looking for Andre’s room. They came to a hall on the

top story of the house where two guards were outside the door Ryan and

John acted like they were drunk and walked up to the guards and took them

out they hid them in the room across the hall from where they were. Both of

the seals walked into his room with there guns drawn and grabbed the real

Andre They put him to sleep and then put him in his wheel chair which he

used for his bad leg injury from getting shot. They got down to the truck

with no problems and made there way out of the compound. Once they got a

half-mile down the road a machine gun on top of the wall opened fire on the

truck. As the truck sped up the gunner got smaller and smaller and soon was

out of sigh. “Well that was exciting wasn’t it?” Shouted Mike “Well it’s not

over yet.” David countered. “We still have to have to get him back to HQ.”

Yeah hopefully that will be easier where is it located at?” questioned Ryan.

Just keep going about seventy more miles and well be there. They finally got

to the border that was protected by American mercenaries.


David jumped out of the truck to tell them to let them through. “We

have Andre in our custody and we need to get through.” David explained,

“In a southern accent the man replied “Okay yall be on your way now.”

“Wow it fells good to be back in America!” Yelled Austin The teams got

back to HQ and go a couple days worth of sleep. They all woke up to a

screeching sound of the alarm and the words Code Alpha that meant come

out shooting. They all got their guns and supplies and went outside too see

what was happening. They see Mexicans jumping the wall into the base with

ak-47 and other assorted guns that they had stolen. Every one started

shooting the invading Mexicans. Most of the Americans had barricaded

themselves into their barracks. Down a couple buildings you could see

Mexicans throwing grenades into the American barracks. Some of the

soldiers would come running out on fire then the insurgents would shoot

them. The three teams got out of their barracks and ran to the armory to stop

the insurgents from rearming. There were a couple of them in there already

but they got rid of them. It seamed like they never stopped coming over the

wall. They had stationary guns on top some of the buildings that the

Americans were gunning. It seamed like once they got on the guns the

invading Mexicans stopped jumping the wall. The Americans finally got

atop the wall to try and stop more of them but the Mexicans were fleeing.

“I’ve never seen anyone run that fast before!” Mike said falling on the

ground laughing. “Well that is all the fun I need for one day.” Said David


After the capture of Andre Viscoure Mexico came into somewhat civil

rest there were not as many attacks of the civilians or attacks on other

countries. The U.S. tried to set up a government in Mexico like they did in

2005. There are still many insurgents in Mexico that still haven’t been

captured. A couple months later president John Williams Created a new

branch of elite soldiers he could call on for any type of mission all over the

world. They are called S.O.A.P.S. (Silent Ops And Procedure Section).

Their mission is to infiltrate and eliminate.


The president called a meeting

with the S.O.A.P.S team. “Okay I just got Intel that the leader of Serbia

has started a genocide.” Said the President. “I need you guys

to go and eliminate him at all costs, you will ship out in 0400 hours so go get

ready. Everyone is in the briefing room when the commander speaks, “Okay

you will be dropped exactly 4 miles outside hostel territory. You will make

you way into the city and eventually to the central square where

Jiri Znamenacek will give a speech. David, who will be the sniper for this

mission will take the shot from a window down the street where you can

make a quick getaway and none will see you. This is just a suggestion but

there is a bombed out restaurant a quarter mile down the road.” “If we see

any hostels are able to engage?” Inquired David. “If it absolutely necessary

yes you can”


About forty miles away form the drop point the team wakes up and

suits up for combat. The commander yells, “I want you all to have night

vision goggle because if you haven’t seen yet it is dark out side.” The

Commander said with a smirk on his face. “Also you need suppressed

weapons so get what you want, David I want you to use the 50cal. If

successful this will be the army’s new sniper of choice so use it wisely and

don’t miss.” Good luck to you! As the team jumped out of the plane

Somewhat looked like A.A. guns started shooting at the plane. The shells

Started flying right through the group it felt like a campfire when you stand

too close to. The heat was almost unbearable “Look!” David yelled looking

at the plane. The plane had been hit a couple times and looked like it was

heading for the main part of the city. “Great now we have to hope we get

there before the Serbian Army. Once everyone got down to the ground they

took off there shoots and hid them under a tree all wrapped up together. The

team got about half a mile away from the crash site and saw that there were

no people around it they got to the site to find the pilots and commander had

all killed. They set a charge of C4 and detonated it. Well let’s go to that

building and camp out for the night. The team got there without any

problems and planned there route of attack for the next day. The next
morning there was workers putting up banners up for the dictators arrival.

Little by little the crowd gathered in the square to see the newly elected

dictator be assassinated which they didn’t know was going to happen. “All

right lets get ready here comes his convoy.” Ryan whispered. David loaded

the chamber as quietly as possible with only the sound of some beat down

cars in the distance. Right as Jiri Znamenacek got to the podiums David

pulled the trigger so slow and smooth even he wasn’t sure when it was

gonna shoot. An echoing shock wave hit the crowed like a ton of dynamite

they all fell to the ground in fear of there own lives. One of Jiri Znamenacek

men saw another sniper in a other building and opened fire. The team got

away scotch free. On ther way back to the drop point they didn’t see any

enemy troops. Once they got back to the base they word that they had found

the sniper responsible for the attack and was executed.

[Toksin]

hmm

SPELLING, SPELLING, SPELLING.

And grammar.

[Ralliart 3000gt]

Sorry didn't think too much of it. I mean its pretty typical, I've played better games with story lines than this. but thats just me.

Maybe you could try fantasy. In my opinion it makes you think out of the square which in turn would force you to create something totally unreal but tell it as if it were.

When you want go back to writing somthing like this implement that imagination, we want to feel like we are there and not reading notes we want to imagine it in detail and feel what the characters are feeling at the time, also look at the typical things people love/hate about real life characters and create them.

Don't know just my