Clk-Gtr

[nicecar]

I did this is a quickie for a mate, since he liked my drawings so much

it is a Mercedes Clk-Gtr done completely in pencil, with a small(very!)
reference.



i want C+C please, since i need to improve on freehand

-chris

[knightvision]

The cartoon is good, it just looks not really finished somehow.

You should try to make a more serious drawing of it. Try to use your pencils for shading, also. If you want to improve your freehand skills, you must try to draw a 1:1 copy of the car.

[nicecar]

actually, the car was about a 2:1 copy since the ref was so small

thanks for the criticism, i need it

[KARTOONZ]

I like it .Try a black outline on it ..it will bring your toon more alive.keep up the good work

[lepain]

nice toon. Ive always loved the clkgtr.
try to loosen up and get more flowing lines onto the paper.

[stuffbyalex]

Nice toon! I've always loved this car. Even though it's a toon and the proportions are supposed to be distorted, the angle of the windshield is looking a bit "un-aerodynamic" right now. Other than that, everything looks good!

Alex

[69charger426]

the wheels and tires lack 3d and the caliper is to far down on the front brake, other then that its a good toon

[jcsaleen]

Not to bad a little more crunched an it'l be fine...