Second drawing ever!!!!!

[S14.Blacktop]

Hey guys, wow I havent posted here in a while...
Anyway, Im almost done with my second drawing and thought before I get too ahead of myself Ill show guys to give me some C+C.
Thanks!

[g00eY]

looks pretty good for your first second drawing ever, especially since it's a Supra(they are super hard to draw for some reason...). but i'm gonna be honest with you that front bumper really needs work cuz i can't tell what's going on. this looks like it's in its earlier stages so i'll wait for some more progress to give you some more tips. i can't wait to see this finished!

[knightvision]

Originally Posted by g00eY

looks pretty good for your first second drawing ever, especially since it's a Supra(they are super hard to draw for some reason...). but i'm gonna be honest with you that front bumper really needs work cuz i can't tell what's going on. this looks like it's in its earlier stages so i'll wait for some more progress to give you some more tips. i can't wait to see this finished!

I totally agree. It's the intercooler. It's placed too far in the left regarding the headlights. Correct it and you'll have a great drawing!!

Good work!

[S14.Blacktop]

thanks guys!
Yeah I noticed that too about the bumper but I couldnt place my...eraser on it!
wow that was stupid but yeah ill keep you guys posted on it.

[g00eY]

alright... since i'm super bored right now i decided to come over and give you some more things to work on. it'll be your decision whether you wanna take them into consideration or not, but since it's your second drawing it doesn't matter too much cuz it's already pretty good.

1) like knightvision said, the intercooler needs to be moved right.
2) the vents on the bumper should be symmetrical.
3) the brake vent is slightly crooked and the hole is a bit small.
4) for the side window(s). on a Supra the line that you drew down the window(the part where it opens up) should be somewhat connected to the door panel line. also towards the back(left) bottom of the door the panel should be less jagged and more smooth because this is a round/curvy car.

hmmm... that's all i have for now. have fun working on the Supra. i can't wait to see more progress!

[77_FJ-40_Toyota]

thats not too bad for your second drawing. its not too badly out of perspective niether