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I.P cobra

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looks good
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Looks good to me. However, I think the front wheel perspective is a little off. If you are going for the look of it turned then you are alittle closer, but it is too vertical. Thats easy to fix though.
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Re: I.P cobra

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Looks good to me. However, I think the front wheel perspective is a little off. If you are going for the look of it turned then you are alittle closer, but it is too vertical. Thats easy to fix though.
so you mean that the wheel has too much camber in contrast to the angle of the body?
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Looks great, proportions are good! But it seems to me that the front whel is a bit too much in the front, so the gap behind it is a bit too large. But thats only a small thing. Great job overall.
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Thanks for the crits and comments. Here it is shaded.

almost done!

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fixed up a bit;

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Re: I.P cobra

The front looks a little out of perspective but it's good nonetheless.
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Re: I.P cobra

Looking good. Nice shading work, just a few very minor proportional problems.

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Update!

So far, both cars are models I have. I know the 'vette is a bit small, but I will fix that.

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Re: I.P cobra

looks good keep it up dude! nice racin pic by the way!
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Re: I.P cobra

It looks better with the scene.
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