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#1
12-25-2004, 10:58 PM
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Please give comments!!!!
Hello,
I have been drawing for 9 months constantly and I need to work on my shading and perspective. I just have the basic lines part of car, I need help on detail, Rims,and shading. This is why I am asking the pros, you all can tell me what I need to work on. Thank You.  
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#2
12-25-2004, 11:30 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
1. This is in the wrong section
2. Your lines are smooth, which is a + 3. You car is boxyish - 4. I can make out which cars your drawing + 5. Spoilers are over-exagerated, unless this is a cartoon -/+ depending Anything else guys? I know there's lots, but I'm tired...
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#3
12-26-2004, 09:17 AM
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If I want to ask questions on art I've done, which forum would i post in ??
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#4
12-26-2004, 11:34 AM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
The one that says Completed and In Progress....at the top of your page...
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#5
12-26-2004, 02:14 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
Dont worry about it, I put it in the right place for ya. The drawings look nice. Id like to see some shading though.
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#6
12-26-2004, 02:47 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
Not bad. I think HONU has covered everything pretty much. Watch out for the ellipses, they're a little bit off on both drawings.
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12-27-2004, 02:06 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
Good start, work on the stuff that HONU said is a - point.
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#9
12-27-2004, 07:02 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
the rooftop of the supra has to be lower i think.
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#10
12-27-2004, 10:02 PM
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Re: Please give comments!!!!
Hehe...It was a new marking system. Any C+C on it....Wait, I did it again...= -...
This is bad 
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