a beginer

[mina97]

hi everybody
i tried a 3/4 sketsh and this is what i made
please tell me your opinions
i am a beginer and needs every advise

[mina97]

[mina97]

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[mike@af]

They look flat.

[HighOctaneNOSUser]

Yep, pancake cars!

[Eband00]

what are you talking about, those are very good for a begginner!! Pff...

[Zwofurti]

actually you have really straight and cool lines!=)

work on the proprtions and the ellipses!

[HighOctaneNOSUser]

We're not saying it looks bad, we were merely pointing out that, proportionally, they're flat. I didn't say that the perspective was bad, the angles were bad, the lines were bad, the elipses were bad. I said nothing about it being bad, so obviously you assumed that I thought they were bad and was disgusted with the drawings. Because, honestly, i think they are really good. But, unfortunatly, you thought you could think for me, and thought you could put words in my mouth, that I thought they were bad. in fact, there is very little wrong with them. Trust, I know a bad car, even for a beginner. So please, I ask you to merely think things through before you, A) assume and B) Try to put words in them mouth of someone who has had an extremely bad day, and is in no mood to be told what they have said.

[Jeep_Rubicon]

not bad, need to work on proportions and ellipses, keep practicing

[ww667]

perspective is a bit off.
just like on all what i do (imagenery) that is why you newer see them :P
exept that just one thing i can tell you draw draw draw and you will do good.

[GirlBear]

as a begenner very nice work.

[mina97]

i thank all of you a lot and i will work harder

[ww667]

and mina97 do not hide your works, show them to us.
may be we are a critics but we do that to point out your mistakes and recomend how to fix them.
So just draw and whene you run out of ideas it is time to go out look around hang out with the friends. thrust me only way for me to get inspration is to go and do something else then draw.
For example every day i come from work i take the same stretcar and go by the same yellow Diablo witch is parked at one preformance shop.
Every time i see it it is just geting me pumpt up.

[mike@af]

Originally Posted by HighOctaneNOSUser

We're not saying it looks bad, we were merely pointing out that, proportionally, they're flat. I didn't say that the perspective was bad, the angles were bad, the lines were bad, the elipses were bad. I said nothing about it being bad, so obviously you assumed that I thought they were bad and was disgusted with the drawings. Because, honestly, i think they are really good. But, unfortunatly, you thought you could think for me, and thought you could put words in my mouth, that I thought they were bad. in fact, there is very little wrong with them. Trust, I know a bad car, even for a beginner. So please, I ask you to merely think things through before you, A) assume and B) Try to put words in them mouth of someone who has had an extremely bad day, and is in no mood to be told what they have said.

Are you sure youre 13?

[HighOctaneNOSUser]

What do you mean, I kinda spazzed, I know, but hell, it was the worst of all days. I was sick, I had my 4 most hated subjects in school, and I was, again, in no mood to discuss what I had said.