Ok first one

[ww667]

so ok guys here it is i'm new to this place and i am just starting to learn how this is done.

I hope you like it.
Can i get some feedback here ?

[Ra_15]

Pretty good. The front should come down more vertically below the lights. You should add a bit more detail and some shading.

[ww667]

working on it

[mike@af]

Not bad man, not bad at all so far.

[KARTOONZ]

Dont forget to add your rear wheel fender flare like the front , other than that sweet . Lets see it colored too

[ww667]

will do guys.
will get on tah as soon as i will get back from school

[KustmAce]

Originally Posted by KARTOONZ

Dont forget to add your rear wheel fender flare

Yup, thats real important. One of the most important things.

So are doors.

[ww667]

hei guys it is just work in progres i can call you atleas 5 more things that need to be added
the section where is a miror dor not ending rims color son and so on
will do will show

[xyfalconsrock]

thats good so far,
your lines are a bit shaky in places but you are advancing nicely.
i'm glad your using a elipes guide on the wheels.
Keep it up.

[bonzelite]

that a subie STi?

front wheel is too small.

otherwise, this is a really good start.

[ww667]

Originally Posted by xyfalconsrock

thats good so far,
your lines are a bit shaky in places but you are advancing nicely.
i'm glad your using a elipes guide on the wheels.
Keep it up.

yes i am and i can recomend it to any one who is starting up as to train it to work for you will be long time but with this guide elipes are just snap to draw.

[Jeep_Rubicon]

like bonz said, the front wheel is too small, good start though.

[stuffbyalex]

looks good. the roof and top of the windshield seem to slope down toward the driver side too much. Also, the top of the windshield curves toward the wrong direction, if that makes any sense.

bonz, it looks a bit like an elantra to me.

Alex

[bonzelite]

yeah. were it the subie, the hood crease lines would extend all the way down to the headlights and hug them around.

i'm projecting my own tastes upon the drawing, which is too cursory at this stage to say much else.