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Old 08-16-2004, 01:10 AM
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first sketch!

http://home.comcast.net/~nelbetchar/Porsche_911.jpg

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Old 08-16-2004, 01:17 AM
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Hey, that looks pretty good. All I would focus on is your lights and darks. Darken the insides of the wheels, the front bumper, the shadow underneath the vehicle, etc. It will make the drawing stand out much more, giving it a more photo-realistic look.

Is that your signature at the bottom of the drawing? That looks pretty cool
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Old 08-16-2004, 10:44 AM
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Re: first sketch!

From what I can see that is a good drawing. As said above darken your drawings. Also smooth out your shading. Your rims need work, but many car drawers have trouble with them. Yours look like they are made out of paper. Keep up the good work!
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Re: first sketch!

I cant really see it. Try and darken it up
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Re: first sketch!

I cant really see it. Try and darken it up
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Re: first sketch!

Try using darker pencils for the contrast (4-9b). Also, use a tortillon to smooth the shading, if you haven't got one of those, use a tissue, and check out the sticky threads for info on elipses. Not bad though perspectively, and im sure you can easily improve you shading.
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Re: first sketch!

thanks everybody,
but whats a tortillon?
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Re: first sketch!

Use a tissue then if you don't know. Its a pencil shaped thing to help smooth your drawings out.
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Re: first sketch!

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Re: first sketch!

yo! check out my web site at nessdesigns.wetpaint.com
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Yo check out my web site at nessdesigns.wetpaint.com!! I DONT KNOW HOW TO PUT DRAWINGS ON HERE !!!!!
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Re: first sketch!

it kind da blur man but it's good any way
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