350z sketch /drawing in prog?

[aequrico]

well hers a 350z .. havnt posted in a while. well it kinda is... doesnt really look like it anymore eh? lol. well...not sure if i shuld keep going so just askin for sum crit and suggestions. and if bonzelite remembers he told me to concentrate on the body thus the lack of wheels. =). so here goes.

[bonzelite]

aequirco, i remember. work on cleaning up your sketch lines. make bold, sweeping strokes with your whole arm. not wrist.

examine the slope of the roof towards the back. it looks a bit funny.

so far it is ok.

[Ra_15]

You should keep going! Its pretty good perspectively. You should try shading it.

[stuffbyalex]

aequrico,

Not bad at all. Try shading it... its good practice.

Right now, there are a few things I see. Bonz mentioned the back of the roof. Also, you have no roof. The windshield and side windows should not extend that high.

The front and back both look a little short, and the wheelbase too long. A simple solution: bring the wheels closer together.

One more thing: watch out where the door connects to. It should be connected to the inside of the a pillar and the outside of the b pillar. In your drawing, the door lines lead to nowhere.

Otherwise, good job. Just a few changes.

Alex

[aequrico]

thanx alex. i wasnt sure what i needed to fix... meh no roof lol... i never thought about that.. pillars.. ah right. lol..

cheers guys