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Old 07-06-2004, 11:52 PM
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JDM Converted Integra

I got bored so I decided to post progress on the Integra I'm drawing. The shading still needs a lot of help but it's turning out better than my last attempt. Comment and Criticize away.
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Old 07-06-2004, 11:59 PM
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Re: JDM Converted Integra

For one it looks REALLY rough. And the headlights look at little "smooshed". The outline is decent.
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Old 07-07-2004, 11:11 AM
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you should try when you draw, that will help a lot

look at the garage in the back. it is a garage right. wtf is wrong with it. the lines are really sketchy and just going anywhere. i hate it when people don't try. this jdm teg can be drawn the best way possible but that garage in the background would ruin everything.

its a good outline. really good. now just draw in those wheels and check out shading tutorials, that will help you.

take your time...you're a good artist.
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Re: JDM Converted Integra

Yes, you've obviously got the talent. For now the best thing is to take your time, like the others said. Have you seen my audi tutorial, if not, go to it (its on the sub-forum), and see if it helps.
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Old 07-07-2004, 09:49 PM
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The background was drawn after i got frustrated so i just kinda starting drawin the lines really rough. I plan on fixing it for the final copy.
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I finished the sketch. My rims suck really bad and i decided not to shade it because i cant. I also made my first attempt at blending on the underbody shadow, and I think it turned out alright considering I used toilet paper, lol. C & C please.
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Re: JDM Converted Integra

You cant just shade pieces of the car like the headlights, grill, weather stripping, and undershadow. Either shade the whole thing, or nothing at all. Also, the rims have no depth to them at all.

(Also your attitude sucks... "I didnt shade because I cant" let me play you a song on the worlds smallest violin. But seriously, what the hell kind of attitude is that? Say that you can get better with practice.)

Its a good start, but needs a lot of work. I suggest starting a completely new drawing. (and sorry to sound like an ass)
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