Here you go

[you]

Heres a car i did, i tried to fallow through with a couple angles. The top and middle i drew in pen without pencil so there a bit sloppy, and im pretty sure that backview is wack. but all in all i tried to finish them...

[mike@af]

The third one looks like you were trying to use vanishing points.

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

looks cool. glad to see three views rather than one

i dont like the design on the front...but that just my opinion

and for the back...the car isn't at an angle where the tailights would not be seen...drawing them in and making the bumper not so narrow would improve it.

its cool though...doesn't looks like a bug

oh and was there a rim swap on the back view...cuz theres 5 spokes instead of 6

[you]

yeah i know about the backview, and the spokes i changed them becuase the backview was the first i did..

[bonzelite]

try this one, cupcake:

[you]

did you do that? it all looks better than mine...

[bonzelite]

Originally Posted by you

did you do that? it all looks better than mine...

yes, sunshine, i did. i put lines over yours. see with only a little more work what you can do? and i barely did anything.

compare your exaggerated "wide angle" perspective" that chops off your tail to how i fixed it appropriately for the angle and lens you chose.

see how i refined the front and sides to flow better.

i would recommend, too, you lengthen the wheelbase of the top drawing to match the middle and bottom one.

[you]

Ahhhh, i see what youve done now, you have tought me my lesson bonz..

[bonzelite]

get an import/tuner model and look at how far into perspective you can turn it and still see slivers of the far-sides' head and tail lamps.

this will vary between car designs, but note clearly in your mind's eye WHY the far light disappears, and to what extent, if any, sliver of it is still seen (hint, somtimes a prominent grille feature will occlude a lamp early in rotation; sometimes parts of large wrap-around lamps are seen at any angle).

[you]

I get what your saying. Im going to redo them tonight, atleast the backview, ill post it tomarrow.

[bonzelite]

even a hot wheels or matchbox car will aid you in "seeing." this may be a good way for you to learn perspective without getting into technical deep-water. we wouldn't want to drown you.

[you]

Im a sitting in a rain puddle right now, and im enjoying it.

[bonzelite]

mmmkay. post some more, and i'll point out some perspective tricks. the key is to always "draw through" everything to establish solidly the places where things are attached and extend spaced apart.

this takes intuitive skill, too, as drawing to vanishing points is not fully necessary or practical. it seems like you sort of already get the rudiments of it between what you and i have done so far in this thread.