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Old 06-26-2004, 07:33 PM
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WOAH!!! That is nice. I love the detail. The front rim just looks perfect! How long did it take you?

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Re: Bmw m3

Oh, i forgot to say, the circular grill thing on the left is missing, tut tut. Great drawing never-the-less. Keep it up!

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Re: Bmw m3

the grill thing is make that way
http://216.117.199.231/BMW-M3-CSL/BMW-M3-CSL-010.JPG

and it took me about 5 hours to make..
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Re: Bmw m3

well, i'd be lying if i said i liked the car, but the drawing is sweeeeet!! I love your unique style.

I don' really have anything to critisize, except the ellipses and tires look a little off(i have that problem too), and i think a little more blending in the interior would look better IMO.

A couple questions: did you "mirror image" the car yourself, or on computer? and what size paper?

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yea love that!!! i love your style, it is very unique. great job.
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Re: Bmw m3

oops wrong pic
http://216.117.199.231/BMW-M3-CSL/BMW-M3-CSL-004.JPG

hey stuffbyalex i used 8 1/2 by 11 paper
normaly i cut the borders but i wont this time
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Nice drawing. Your sig follows the perspective.
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You forgot the side vents!
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looks very good.

very nice job on the front rim but i think the shading in the interior and the shadow on the left side of the car should be blended

the whole car is very well done
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thats really good man.
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Re: Bmw m3

very nice. excellent.

now for the nit-picking: passngr. side headlights not as developed as driver's side. why?

reflections on side of body are excellent. reflections of hood and windscreen are non-existent and/or weak. why?

you're missing a front blinker/fog light. why?

front rim is excellent. just rocks the house. but the rubber tire it's wrapped in is f*(cked up. big ol flat spot and deformity going on -why?

dash and steering wheel are not developed. look like afterthoughts almost like kartoon. you fully commited to detailed realism. you faltered with interior. so whussup? why?

overall car is solidly developed tonally. but car's shadow is like half-baked. ragged-rendered or something. why?

in general, you are really good. work on your rendering accuracy a bit more and you will be on a pretty high horse.

but you're not yet. i'm picking on you in this case because you are really talented.
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Very nice drawing. I realy like that style of M3.
Bonz brings some good points up.

Hey Bonz like your critques you realy help us out.

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Re: Bmw m3

the reason for this is very simple, i did it very fast!!!
next time, i will take my time!!!!
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Re: Bmw m3

5 hours is fast? Great drawing btw. Just some of the things that Bonz said would make it better. I think im going to have to adopt a sig. like yours, looks very professional!
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