New drawing

[5uPrA RyDa]

too big ill make it smaller

heres a drawing i just did a couple of days ago, tell me what u think

c&c would be great

oh yea sorry about that bend in the paper

[lostprophets]

you're getting better... it looks the only big things i see are the body shape... the way you put the spoiler in --- flat, doesnt match the angle of the rest of the car put it more on a slant... put the wing on the angle of the hood line and the wheels dont match...the front is 6 spoke and the rear is 5 but those can be fixed easily.... the shading and all that is good and the ground fx kit looks really good

[lemorris]

Better neater cleaner meaner.

You've been doin your homework. Keep it up.

Try to shore up your lines and perspective before you jump in with all your shading.

-Lemorris

[5uPrA RyDa]

thanks for the advice josiah and lemorris.

[stuffbyalex]

nice job. but i agree w/ the others. the shading is really improving, but i would work on proportions first. All I can suggest is to take your time with the outline drawing. Trust me... if you can combine a perfectly proportioned outline with your shading techniques, you'll end up with an awesome drawing.

Keep practicing

Alex

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

try the grid method, and for shading, go dark to light...your whole car is pretty much one shade

[Ra_15]

Getting better! Take more time on the details, (like the seats) and you'll improve loads.

[castback]

good job. i think that you should start working on your detial more along with everthing everyone else said