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Old 05-10-2004, 06:10 PM
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180sx progress

right, if theres anything wrong, which they're probably is, tell me, cuz at this stage, i can still fix stuff. i still dont have the whole proportion thong nailed, so if something looks wrong, tell me.
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Old 05-10-2004, 06:16 PM
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Re: 180sx progress

It looks ayte with me. How did you get it to fit the page like that? all you need to do now is to add the wheels and mirrors.
Looking good man, keep it up.

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It needs to be wider and a little longer. Use a bigger piece of paper to accomidate the size.
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Re: 180sx progress

I think the measurments are right Mshkttck. It's just that the drawing is nearly touchin both sides of the page, that's what makes it look as if it's squished a little.

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yah, i made the front lower and i think it looks wider now, i think i got it to fit the page with luck, i guess...ill get a pic, oh i just did it quick, i made the front smaller and i forgot to lower sum things, but you can get an idea that it looks better i think...

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Re: 180sx progress

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right, if theres anything wrong, which they're probably is
It doesnt have wheels.

Anyway, your are really good at laying down the lines of a car.
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Cool

Very accurate lines

Peops already mentioned the paper being too small

I cannot wait to see this one shaded.

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thnx everyone, my biggest problem is proportions and making the car fit in the paper, my next drawing will be on big poster paper or something, and maybe that'll make it easier...

unfortunately, its guna take a while for this to get done cuz i get distracted easily and i get bored of my projects, so dont expect it too be done soon

OH MY crap, i dont have wheels on it, :o

thnx for pointing it out mike, i'll be SURE to fix that... thank you

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The far side of the hood should be a little flatter, it's too round. Oh, and the headlights are a little small. Great job so far, I can't wait 'till you're done!

BTW sorry if I'm too much of a perfectionist
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i love perfectionists, im fixing all of the problems i see and the ones you guys pointed out.. thnx
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In the reference pic, the top of the headlights is higher than the top of the wheel well. In the drawing, it is not so. Also, the foglight is too big. Next is the far side of the front lip. In the reference pic, if you follow along the angle on the top of the lip, it alighns with the far side of the windshield. In the drawing it is too stubby. Also, the trunk is too low in the drawing. Did you forget the mirrors and the door handle?
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Re: 180sx progress

I think the wing should be redone, like mentioned. Also something else, when you compare front overhangs between yours and the reference's, yours has less. Just a lil' suggestion.
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Re: 180sx progress

Definately too short. Blame the paper size for that on. Looks good though, cant wait to see more progress.
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Re: 180sx progress

alright, i fixed the headlight , and the foglight, i dont understand the problem with the front lip, and yes, i still have to draw the door handle and the mirrors, and the rims... i did not forget, lol...still gotta do the trunk and the spoiler, THANX for all this, im lovin it. haha

makes me realize how much i still have to work to become better...
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Re: 180sx progress

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OH MY crap, i dont have wheels on it, :o

thnx for pointing it out mike, i'll be SURE to fix that... thank you

haha,
Come on Dommy. You cant drift very well with out wheels.
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