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Old 05-08-2004, 03:03 PM
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Tell me what u think.

Hi, This is quick pencil sketch i did of a new design, please crit and tell me what looks good/bad. BTW sorry for the bad quality pic, i aint got a good cam.



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Re: Tell me what u think.

Looks like you got a lot of inspiration from Canay. If I hadn't of seen Canay's I would have said it was really good, but it looks like you did a similar version to his.

Good nonetheless though, as there are differences.
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Yeah, it was inspired very much from canays design. When i saw his drawing i was amazed, that's what motivated me to draw again, but i hope it aint a ripoff of his.
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Re: Tell me what u think.

Looks good, but I would shorten it, heighth wise. The front end looks a lil tall
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Re: Tell me what u think.

Now that'll be even closer to canays design, lol. I'll be doin more designs so keep tuned. Anyways, keep the critz coming...

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it looks great, but make it wider.
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Re: Tell me what u think.

I think it looks good...everything cept the wheels. They look a bit crooked. But Im diggin the design! Keep em comin!
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Re: Tell me what u think.

thats pretty cool
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Re: Tell me what u think.

cool

Nice job on the side.

Just widen the footprint and it'll drive off the page.

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I din't really like this sketched design but i've posted it anyway.

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Re: Tell me what u think.

I like this one too.

Just like on the last one try to widen the body. If it has a wider footprint it will have a much more realistic, and aggresive stance.

You might consider starting out with a real light cube shape, and then carving your car out of it.

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Quick sketch of a BMW Concept, little changes here and there, nothin special. Tell me what u think, Likes/ Dislikes...



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