new drawing , mustang - gtr concept

[koganei_hikaru]

Hi, this is my new drawings , mustang - gtr. Any critizm would be appreciate ^_^



thanks.

[Little_Stang87]

Sweet drawing

[Ra_15]

Good, although it looks a bit plain, with not much detail. I think you need to spend a little longer on your drawings, to give them more depth and feel. Click on the 'My Gallery' link at the bottom of my signature to see the Mustang GT-R that I did. Although its color, if you spend 2-3 hours you'll be able to get alot more detail in, and make it look more real.

Overall, for the amount of time it looks like you put in, I think you did a good job with proportions and the shading isn't that bad

[mike@af]

Originally Posted by Ra_15

Good, although it looks a bit plain, with not much detail. I think you need to spend a little longer on your drawings, to give them more depth and feel. Click on the 'My Gallery' link at the bottom of my signature to see the Mustang GT-R that I did. Although its color, if you spend 2-3 hours you'll be able to get alot more detail in, and make it look more real.

Overall, for the amount of time it looks like you put in, I think you did a good job with proportions and the shading isn't that bad

[Mshkttck]

The far side of the spoiler is too short. Other than that, it's great.

[KustmAce]

Very nice idea, i really like it. Aside form the spoiler i think the only other thing to work on is the wheels. The spokes of the front wheel are a bit off, and the rear wheel is a bit blurred. So just work on that.

Also, now that i think of it, is you shade the darks darker, it will give the entire car more depth, and add to the detail they are talking about above.

[Jeep_Rubicon]

the wheels r kinda off especially the rear wheel.
the front looks plain, darken the shading.
overall its a good drawing.
i like it

[snowman2005]

haha thats the one im doing right now. nice work

[castback]

i like it but i agree with what everyone else is saying about how it looks not finished. if i were you i would just put an hour into setting down and just shade it a lot more and give it some reflections too.


mshkttck...do you play n.f.s.u.g. online for ps2? if you do we'll have to race. ive got some mad skill on driftin'

[quarter_mile]

Good line drawing, but it's pretty plain. add more contrast, more shading to give it more tone.

[94tegRS]

also, the wheel well in the rear looks kinda out of round, right where the hgihlight is needs to be pulled away from the wheel a bit cuz it flattens out right there. but looks good.

[koganei_hikaru]

Thanks for your comment guys. I'll try to re-draw the parts like the rear wheels, shading , and muflers . Thanks... keep on commenting

[quarter_mile]

Oh yeah. One more thing.
I'm guessing this was your ref. pic.

http://www.fast-autos.net/ford/gtrconcept5.html

On the ref. pic. you'll notice it has alot more reflections/highlights then you have put in.

Such as.
-The shine on the wheels.
-The reflection of the spoiler on the car.
-The shine on the side exhaust.
-The front bumper, the small light in the hole, it is darker then you have drawn it.


Generally, the car needs to be darker and have all the details I have mentioned.

Once again, nice line drawing. How old are you?

[Mshkttck]

Originally Posted by castback

i like it but i agree with what everyone else is saying about how it looks not finished. if i were you i would just put an hour into setting down and just shade it a lot more and give it some reflections too.


mshkttck...do you play n.f.s.u.g. online for ps2? if you do we'll have to race. ive got some mad skill on driftin'

Nope. I don't play online... yet.

[koganei_hikaru]

Thanks ' i'll do it better next time