What do you think?

[GAMsALeh]

This is a design that i finished now and started 10 minuts ago . I can't be bothered to do any shading on it cuz i'll just endup spoiling it, but if you think you could do a bit of shading yourselves it would be great cuz i'm a beginner and seeking help, so hopefully i one day will reach the stage of being a pro. Anyways i just wat you to comment on it, say what you like and don't like so that i can modify it.

I never manage to get a pic on here so if it don't work plz tell me how you do it. It's in my Gallery.

Here goes...



Thanks in advance.

[GAMsALeh]

Damn. It didn't work!

[acoustic]

upload on the automotive forums gallery, that always works for me, cant wait to see it.

[GAMsALeh]

It is on there. The one on the far left.

[acoustic]

thats not bad, the only problem that sticks out is the bottom of the front is too parellel to the paper. kinda see what im sayin? Its tilted. But hey, thats good, especially for 10 minutes!!!

[KustmAce]

make the windshield parallel to the bottom of the front bumper...problem solved

[Zcaithaca]

is this the one?

[GAMsALeh]

Yeah, that's the one Zcaithaca. Sorry for troubling you all the time with this problem. If you tell me how you did it i would have to trouble you again. Can you also tell what you think of it and how i can change it to make it look better.

Thanks

[GAMsALeh]

I just modified the drawing abit at the windshield cuz it really did look out of place. tell me if it looks any better (it's in my gallery named: car design redone)

Thanks

[jordanmc2399]

it looks kinda out of perspective

[GAMsALeh]

I modified it a little but i don't know how i can post it here(it's the one in my gallery titled 'car design redone'). Can someone plz tell me how? Can you also tell me, when you see it, what you like /dislike about it and how good it actually is (the design) so i know how to improve on it next time i draw a pic.

Thanks y'all i'm of to bed

zzzzzzzzzzz

[KustmAce]

i think if you angle the front end up more, it needs to be less parallel with the bottom of the paper.

I like the design though

[KustmAce]

or even take less angle out of the a-pillar, that might do it

[tokes99]

I you have a scanner or copier you can copy the line drawing so you can experiment with different renderings and you can make as many as you want without messing up or redoing the original.

[acoustic]

either drop the left side where the hood meets the windshield, or raise the right side where the hood meets the windshield. or you could do both. i hope you get what im sayin, cause it would help it alot i think