sportish lookin car

[whitepawn]

Check it out...
tell me what u think of it (did i get the angles right? Anything wrong with the rear wheel?)

http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/sportey3.jpg


revised versions
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r1.jpg
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r2.jpg
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r3.jpg

[tUsCaN_rAiDeR]

i reckon it looks cool. just a recommendation, i think that the perspective and rear proportion needs to be a bit different, like making the rear larger but keeping the rear wheel about that size.
yea thats about it...just practice proportion and perspective and u'll be sweet. it is hard, i still struggle a bit with it.

[whitepawn]

hmm ...I agree. Thanks for the advice

[jordanmc2399]

ditto. but also ou should be able to see the the other wheel. i dunno which is the back or front so i think it is the side that faces you. good job

[ghetto7o2azn]

it looks too long imo

[tokes99]

I think if you need to do 1 of 2 things, because the angle is off. For you to have that much or the rear end showing, I do not think the car should not recede in that manner, so you can either change the rear end make it shorter or shorten the overall length, does that make sense? It is just my opinion, though.

[quarter_mile]

well, the car itself seems a little too long and a bit high off the ground.
ditto about the perspective, you need to practice that a bit, but i like the design of the car.

[whitepawn]

Yea! I see what u guys mean! Thanks for the constructive crit!

[whitepawn]

Allrite...here is the revised version.
for those who like to see process Ive included 3 pics. I think I got the perpective right but Im not sure abt the lenght of the car...anywyas check it out and tell me if Its improved.
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r1.jpg
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r2.jpg
http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r3.jpg

[tokes99]

the rear, side and wheels look like the all match, but the rear and side window look out of perspective maybe because it seems as if the roof is showing and from that angle it sould not. it is hot though has that aggresive low to the ground feel. And I like the way you have rendered it.

[whitepawn]

oh really...I thought I did it right...the roof as being parallel to the rear and all.

[tUsCaN_rAiDeR]

you definitely have the right idea, i think that this one is the best proportionally: http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r1.jpg
...however ur highest priority is the length. could i please print it and see if i can show you (in my opinion) the correct proportions? im not 100% sure but i think that if u change the length, all of the other problems will become more appparent

[jordanmc2399]

yes i agree^^^ but the opther pics, the car is still too long!!!

[whitepawn]

Originally Posted by tUsCaN_rAiDeR

you definitely have the right idea, i think that this one is the best proportionally: http://gazler.com/users/whitepawn/r1.jpg
...however ur highest priority is the length. could i please print it and see if i can show you (in my opinion) the correct proportions? im not 100% sure but i think that if u change the length, all of the other problems will become more appparent

by all means do so.

abt the proportions on the 1st pic...its the same as the 2nd and 3rd. I tried using the same dimensons and all.

[tUsCaN_rAiDeR]

lol sorry im thick i thought they were different
yea...ive got a bit of drawing to do, wot with integras drawing comp and my ferrari, but urs wont take too long i think.