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Old 05-12-2005, 02:09 AM
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My best chop to date...NEED critiques!

For the contest of at Creative Draft. I figure since voting is already up and almost over I might as well get some feedback here.

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Hatchback Conversion
Shaved Doors/Gas cap
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Wheels
Enlarged front lower air dam
Headlight Covers
Background Change
Cleared Corner lights

Contructive feedback please!!!
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Old 05-12-2005, 09:18 AM
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Re: My best chop to date...NEED critiques!

two things i have noticed

-backround is Ok....but the size of the car and backround dont look good

-rear wheel is not good
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Old 05-12-2005, 01:31 PM
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Re: Re: My best chop to date...NEED critiques!

The graphic on the side seems to look a little fake (at least to me) with that outer glow.
The paint job needs reflections (with objects from the background with their original colors, not being re-painted to the cars new color) because that's the way it works in reality (I assume you know that but I'm just pointing it out).
The opacity of the reflections on the windshield and on the other windows should be a higher and the windows should look more mirror reflecting than regular lightly reflecting.

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two things i have noticed

-backround is Ok....but the size of the car and background don't look good

-rear wheel is not good
I'd have to agree with you about the background and car in it. It seems the car should be bigger but maybe it's just and illusion from those pretty big leaves.

The rear wheel looks pretty fine to me but what might have got you thinking that way is the way it is wrapped under those fenders which makes it look a little odd or the perspective reasons.
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Re: My best chop to date...NEED critiques!

Humm, that was yours!!!! Nice chop, good rival!
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had a hard choice on votign and yours was one of the best.

only things that could use improving are very small thngs like doing reflections etc...

keep it up man VERY good job
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Re: My best chop to date...NEED critiques!


except for the small faults that i pointed on the picture, i dnt realy like the rim choice but thats IMHO, otherwise its a nice chop man, looks pretty kool
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