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Old 11-15-2004, 01:37 PM
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Re: Not really racing but...

well, i wasn't aware of 3 pages.. but try this out

1st page... Intro to charactors and some background with the race

2nd page... frustrations with girl, background on her, her feelings on him, etc
3rd page... the thoughts in his head as he's approaching her... and the fears he has of her never changing... with the song and all... and the resolution
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