[CassiesMan]

Thanks. I'm thinking of ending it like the way it ends, I'll try to build more on the characters a bit without going over the top (we were put on a three page restriction). I might also add another paragraph or two for the race. I was kinda rushed to get a rough draft out. I like the idea of more feeling from his persepective in the race. I'll toy around with it a little, see what I can get outa it.