Poetry or Writing

[grimmy]

i don't think that was silly at all
im going to hold off on posting for a day or two lest we expend our repertoire within the first few weeks. so if anyone else is going to post please feel free to do so

[darkness]

yeah I don't want to run out of stuff to write. I haven't written any in a while, so I've got a limited supply.

[grimmy]

here is the only thing i ever wrote that didn't rhyme
kinda short but to the point


she just stood there oblivious
leaning over her friends desk
she knew not my love for her

she carried on a conversation
she smiled briefly
the same as it was before

[darkness]

I like that one.

Most of mine don't ryhme, I find they sound better not ryhming.
I post a new one at lunch.

[grimmy]

when is lunch for you... i mean what time is it there?

[darkness]

hehe sorry. it's past lunch now, I got a bit busy, it's 3pm here now.

[darkness]

well heres the next one. It came about from my 'handle' darkness. which i had lonfg before I joined AF. and it's why I use the name darkness as my own now.

Darkness

It is quiet and cold
an emptiness neverending
it envelopes and possesses
no emotions or feeling
it is missing something
something that is always different
but it is kept hidden
away from others knowledge
to feel this in the heart is worst
to know there is no love
to know there is no hope
to never feel these
to be alone for life
but can it change
can light dissolve the darkness
no there will never be a change
no warmth can dissolve a frozen heart
there is only one solution
to succumb to the blackness
to let it's power overtake you
to let it take the pain
as it covers and hides you
you withdraw into the shadows
comforted by the loneliness it brings
you dissappear quickly and silently
never to be seen
never to be missed
becoming one with the Darkness.

[grimmy]

anxiety building
intense emotions
waiting patiently
for undying devotions
calming and cooling
as the clock ticks on
apathy invited
it quickly clicks on
he sees her face
she brushes her hair
a love untold
he thinks he must bear
his attention undivided
upon her is given
quickly to love
his heart is driven
unbeknownst to him
she's excited he's there
she turns her attention
pretends not to care
they know eachother not
just a face with a name
their mutual love
is a fire without flame

[darkness]

nice one man.

[grimmy]

folow me you worthless sinner
I will surely make you ill
I will leave you empty bitter
I will make you want to kill

you can't see I've no emotions
I hide from you my blackened soul
drag you through my fiery oceans
I have you all under control

I'll corupt your way of thinking
all thats yours I'll take as mine
you can't see you're slowly sinking
you thought you were so divine

it's time for me to make my rounds
and collect what I must obtain
nothing like the angered sounds
of agony and eternal pain

[darkness]

wow I really like that one. It so fits with Darkness.

Fall

I need to tell you something about myself
before our realtionship
can go any further
I'm the kind of person
who feels very deeply
And when I give my heart
I give it completely
I've never learned how to love
"just a little"
So as you can guess
I've been hurt more than once
However I feel something
strange and wonderful
between us
as if in this brief time
I can already trust you
whole-heartedly
and that's why
one simple question
If I fall for you will you catch you.

[grimmy]

i thought you might like that one
good to know you do


i liked "fall" look at the last line
if i fall for you will you catch you
is that suposed to be will you catch me
or does that have a deeper meaning along the lines of is she strong enough to be able to handle your love?
anywho i think you are slowly changing my mind about not enjoying nonrhyming poetry
and for that i thank you

well it's friday and i don't feel like waiting to post another so....

sing a song of summers past
and fallow moons of yore
tell me all your wicked deeds
and whom you did them for

but do you even know his name
for whom you told those lies
and do you know eternal shame
to stare into his eyes

and you so pure on the outside
so cheating underhanded
just hide it away deep in your mind
there's nothing to be reprimanded

angels you thought sang you to sleep
on all of those restless nights
were demons crouched down on their knees
giving you all of their fright

but shallow though i know i am
i will never do his deeds
for i know i am my own man
not a servant on his knees

now write a song of sorrows grace
and wash it in your tears
a song so true your heart will ache
as it wallows in your fears

so sing a song of summers past
and fallow moons of yore
look down at your blood stained hands
and your soul dying on the floor

[darkness]

whoops yeah it was supposed to be if I fall for you will you catch me.

but I like your reasoning for what I put down.

[SentraGirl]

Wow, those are awesome poems. I love poetry and you guys are great writers, you should try and get some of them published and get some money. I have poems but I'm only 19 so I'm young and I still suck at writing. I'm gonna look for one though. Anyways, I really enjoyed them.

[darkness]

Don't worry Sentra I doubt yours suck. I don't think mine are anything special. and many of them I wrote when I was 19-21 yrs old.