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Old 02-16-2006, 06:20 PM
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Re: A short story of mine...quite long

If you guys were curious, I am kind of thinking of a second part for this, yet I haven't really had the time and it's harder because the rest I think will be made up, so we'll see, thanks yall for readin, still waiitng on my grade for this
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If you guys were curious, I am kind of thinking of a second part for this, yet I haven't really had the time and it's harder because the rest I think will be made up, so we'll see, thanks yall for readin, still waiitng on my grade for this
Or better yet, you can do part of the story where the guy day dreams and you get the ending you'd like to make up. Then after that's done the guy can be snapped out of his day dream and we really find out what happens.
I.E. I want to know if you really told this girl you love her and want to spend the rest of your life with her making babies. I mean come on man we the people of AF have to know this, you owe it to us.
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Or better yet, you can do part of the story where the guy day dreams and you get the ending you'd like to make up. Then after that's done the guy can be snapped out of his day dream and we really find out what happens.
I.E. I want to know if you really told this girl you love her and want to spend the rest of your life with her making babies. I mean come on man we the people of AF have to know this, you owe it to us.

lkol, well, if you wanted to know the REAL truth, I think my chance has come and go, but quite exactly like it has in my story, my situation was a little bit more difficult than that in the story...but I still don't know yet. I'm trying to find out as much information as I can.
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lkol, well, if you wanted to know the REAL truth, I think my chance has come and go, but quite exactly like it has in my story, my situation was a little bit more difficult than that in the story...but I still don't know yet. I'm trying to find out as much information as I can.
Alright well take your time "finding out information" I.E. Describing how this chick looks naked in nice little sentences. I mean if this is going to be a grand ending I want this guy getting laid by this chick while driving his BMW doing 120. What more could you ask for?

Anyway, if you go with the sugar coated ending that's fine. I do want the real ending as well in another story or some kind of auto-commentary
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Re: A short story of mine...quite long

Instead of making a new thread, thought I would just bring back this one since the question i'm going to ask is directly related.

Would anyone have a good idea on where I could possibly publish this? I am very confident with this story and feel very accomplished everytime I read it. If anyone lives in the tristate area (NY, NJ, CT) and knows a place or has an idea in general, just let me know?
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Re: A short story of mine...quite long

Wow man thats a really good story... as far as the publishers though I think just do a google search for plublishers... I know there are a bunch of companies that just do short stories....
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