Mugen Honda Integra Type R

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

i did.

[bonzelite]

dezi z, author of the mugen integra, you have talent to draw. that is clear. go work on your skill. the two are not equal at this time.

[Desi Z 07]

Edited:


I tried to fix as much of it as possible (w/o having to start over), according to bonzelite, and secretmodder's guidelines. I didnt fix the problem w/ the rear being too short, as i would have to erase most of my drawing to fix it. I tried to fix the wing, sideskirts, mirrors, and top of driver door to the best of my abilities. The wheels had bad ellipses because the lines werent for the wheels. It was the tire, and its shadow, so they looked kind of off. Its still probably not up to some of your standards, but its the best i can do for now, and I learned a lot from it.

Thanx to everyone for the comments, compliments, and advice, they were all very helpful.

As for the Tutorial, sure, but i dont know what the tutorial would be for.

[bonzelite]

it is much better now. just add the wheels. the drawing is heaps better than what it was.

you don't need to be exactly mimiking the photo for a great presentation. you have done a lot, and you are commended for it. the flaws in it now are hidden enough and actually work within the universe of that specific drawing. i would not go back anymore and change anything. there comes a point where certain things are the way they are, and it doesn't matter anymore. the idea is to create an overall impression.

i pointed out what i did so that you can open your eyes to these seemingly elusive nuances that add up to create a convincing and strong illustration. in time, awareness of these things will become instantaneous.

you have many more drawings yet to do, so move on and start fresh. today, you have a lot more knowledge at your disposal. it will only enhance your talent.

[bonzelite]

desi, i want to add that your drawing looks great. i do not want to have you thinking that you did bad work. you did great work. i want to help you make it kick a$$. cars are very unforgiving things to draw, especially if you attempt to do photorealism. so you are again applauded for venturing into this deep water.

cheers, mate

[bonzelite]

desi, i will guide you through the wheels. these are THE most unforgiving element of vehicles. don't worry. you will do it. and i will help you achieve the correct angles of elipses. go at your own pace.

[Desi Z 07]

Thanks a lot Bonz. Im not sure when my friend is going to get his new wheels, but whenever they get in, ill ask him to take more pictures, and ill try and draw them in. Ill post up when they get in.

[bonzelite]

right.

that car would look great with old-skool bronze classic mugen wheels (panasport-esque), panasports, rotas, volk TE-37s, marquis-promodas, work professors, SSRs, 5-ziggen typhoons.

[lemorris]

Hey Desi,

Follow up with Bonz on that tire tip. He won't steer you wrong.

The car is nice. Bonz is correct. Sometimes in our individual pursuits for perfection we over-work a piece. I don't think that is the case here, but you're on the fence. Jump into the tires man.

When inking, or building a flash application, or whatever it is. I always do the hardest part first. I'm fresh and eager after I tackle the hard stuff everything else is cake. I can cruise to the finish...enjoying the view...smiling at my inner peace....learning to love again....eating sardines in mustard sauce and waving at the......huh?.. oh ....anyway do the tires.

-Lemorris

[Desi Z 07]

Thanks a lot for all the help and compliments. Wouldnt look like it does now if nobody told me it sucked... . Ill def. follow up w/ Bonz on the wheels, I get a feeling im going to need some help drawin the Mugen MF-10's my friend is getting .

[bonzelite]

Originally Posted by lemorris

Hey Desi,

Follow up with Bonz on that tire tip. He won't steer you wrong.

The car is nice. Bonz is correct. Sometimes in our individual pursuits for perfection we over-work a piece. I don't think that is the case here, but you're on the fence. Jump into the tires man.

When inking, or building a flash application, or whatever it is. I always do the hardest part first. I'm fresh and eager after I tackle the hard stuff everything else is cake. I can cruise to the finish...enjoying the view...smiling at my inner peace....learning to love again....eating sardines in mustard sauce and waving at the......huh?.. oh ....anyway do the tires.

-Lemorris

lemorris is talking, humourously, about the "zone." i feel you, leemo.

[asaenz]

Good Mugen, Bonz will make you better
I am glad Bonz, Lemorris, SeCrEtMoDdEr, and others are honest.

I hope peops don't let truth w/ some harshness scare, or make them mad.

I'd rather have my ego hurt and learn than not learn.

al

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

It looks much better now...much better...

im not guna go all fancy pants like chad, but ill just say it's great

i dont think im capable of talking about all the intellectual words and that stuff...i understand it, but when i try to write like that i get confused, and end up making no sense whatsoever.

soooo it looks great, cant wait for the rims...not te-37's chad...jeez...

looks very

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[bonzelite]

you don't like te-37s?

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

oh, i absolutely LOVE te-37's...best rims

but not on this mugen associated car