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[LilGmoney]

what the bloody hell is that?

[lemorris]

Gettin better LilGmoney,

Maybe your scan doesn't do the overall drawing justice. I might suggest making those dark areas darker. Your wheels kinda fall off on the back side. It could be mechanical. Try to draw with your arm more. The longer smoother arc will serve you well.

Overall...Thumbs up.

Do more.

-Lemorris

[D[X]P]

Not bad. Grr I want to draw now but I cant cause I am doing schoolwork..grr

[metal]

For all of you that are too lazy to click his link =P

Looks pretty good to me, dunno whats going on with the back wheel, looks like its melting or something Shading is pretty nice too

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

rims need work, and so does shading, if sumthing it totally dark in the pic, it should be totally dark in your drawing...the wheels should be darker and also the body kit indents need to be way darker

[bonzelite]

looks like verging on kartoon kar layout. car is stubby. it is ok at this point, but make a choice: kartoon or reality. make that choice.

if you go kartoon, you still need to know reality. so it is not easy either way. get a model of that car. study the model. hold it in your hand. look at it from many angles. watch to see how it behaves. know the enemy and make it your ally.

observe how 3-d space alters the car that you think you know so well. you will see that you do not really know it as well as you think you do.

cheers, mate.

[lostprophets]

Originally Posted by bonzelite

looks like verging on kartoon kar layout. car is stubby. it is ok at this point, but make a choice: kartoon or reality. make that choice.

if you go kartoon, you still need to know reality. so it is not easy either way. get a model of that car. study the model. hold it in your hand. look at it from many angles. watch to see how it behaves. know the enemy and make it your ally.

observe how 3-d space alters the car that you think you know so well. you will see that you do not really know it as well as you think you do.

cheers, mate.

if this guy cant teach you anything you need to quit drawing forever and ever....

[castback]

Originally Posted by lostprophets

if this guy cant teach you anything you need to quit drawing forever and ever....

the thing is....i tought bonza....lol....jk

i do think it is your best. at this rate youll be teaching us all in about.....hmmm....hard to say