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Old 12-30-2004, 01:56 AM   #1
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One of my new ones

Here it is also my first marker render
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:02 AM   #2
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Need to practice perspective.
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:24 AM   #3
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Re: One of my new ones

And in the wrong place....
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:26 AM   #4
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Re: One of my new ones

You've got the idea, my man- go for it!

But loosen up a bit, it will make your renderings more attractive.

You're showing some skill in decent perspective work, decent knowledge of reflections, and decent hand skills. Keep up the good work.
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:28 AM   #5
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BTW, Kustm....Ron White is one hilarious dude, yes?
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:51 AM   #6
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Re: One of my new ones

Could someone tell me where Im off in my perspective?
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:58 AM   #7
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Re: One of my new ones

Your front rises up too much, and looks twisted, your windows are stretched, wheels are too small, The front seems to want to go in to different directions...
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It's the wheels!
it's always the wheels/tires.

Also, the grille- its converging, instead of diverging. It's all pretty subtle, really.

Also, the hood "halves" (as separated by the crown down the middle)- the half in the background is wider than the half in the foreground.

The windshield looks nice, and the trailing edge of the roof-

Anyway, i'll shutup before I piss-off the Mod.

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Why would you piss off the mod?
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Definately the wheels. You have to work on that.
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Thanks for the comments guys.
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Old 12-30-2004, 03:37 PM   #12
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red x for me

btw, who's ron white?
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Lol, they won't tell us, Alex, we're too young to understamd

Give it up now
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Old 12-30-2004, 07:34 PM   #15
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lOl You're pretty damn perceptive, HONU.........

He's just a middle-aged, slightly overweight, highball-drinkin, cigarette smokin' Texan- who also happens to be a great comedian. And, yeah, you probably do have to be a little older to appreciate his style.
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