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12-30-2004, 01:56 AM
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One of my new ones
Here it is also my first marker render
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12-30-2004, 02:02 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
Need to practice perspective.
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12-30-2004, 02:24 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
And in the wrong place....
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12-30-2004, 02:26 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
You've got the idea, my man- go for it!
But loosen up a bit, it will make your renderings more attractive. You're showing some skill in decent perspective work, decent knowledge of reflections, and decent hand skills. Keep up the good work. |
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12-30-2004, 02:28 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
BTW, Kustm....Ron White is one hilarious dude, yes?
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12-30-2004, 02:51 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
Could someone tell me where Im off in my perspective?
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Re: One of my new ones
Your front rises up too much, and looks twisted, your windows are stretched, wheels are too small, The front seems to want to go in to different directions...
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Re: One of my new ones
It's the wheels!
it's always the wheels/tires. Also, the grille- its converging, instead of diverging. It's all pretty subtle, really. Also, the hood "halves" (as separated by the crown down the middle)- the half in the background is wider than the half in the foreground. The windshield looks nice, and the trailing edge of the roof- Anyway, i'll shutup before I piss-off the Mod. Seeya |
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Why would you piss off the mod?
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12-30-2004, 10:08 AM
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Re: One of my new ones
Definately the wheels. You have to work on that.
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Thanks for the comments guys.
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Re: One of my new ones
red x for me
btw, who's ron white?
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Lol, they won't tell us, Alex, we're too young to understamd
 Give it up now
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lOl You're pretty damn perceptive, HONU.........
He's just a middle-aged, slightly overweight, highball-drinkin, cigarette smokin' Texan- who also happens to be a great comedian. And, yeah, you probably do have to be a little older to appreciate his style. |
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