Personal car concept

[crazy_boarder_dude]

well i unno what i can tell you i was bored n started drawing...I drew this from my imagination. This is what i came up with, very rough sketch hmm n very shiity tooo:P
Comments and crits are most certainly welcome ...dont blame me for the shit whhels i drew there just to fill in the space 4 now (general idea)

Questions
How could i fix the front ...it looks fucked
Should i change the wheels?
Hows it look?
Does it remind you of nething...i didnt have nething in mind i want it to be umm different

[mike@af]

Wow, looks like a drawing of AF. Um, where are the pics?

[LanXer]

I dont see any sketches.

[crazy_boarder_dude]

ohh shit mi bad srry guyz im soo out of it today

[superdrifter22]

i think it looks pretty good, but the wheels kind of kill it. the body looks cool though. to change the wheels just look at a pic of some wheels u like and copy-draw

[Ra_15]

Looks like a Corvette back, McLaren F1 middle and Lotus Elise front! Not bad, but I think the wheels need changing especially at the front. Also it looks tiny. You should start again on a bigger scale imo.

[crazy_boarder_dude]

yes it was onli a rough sketch to get a general idea :P i am gonna re-draw it soon any suggestions to change the front??

[Ra_15]

Make it rounder, slightly bigger, and maybe some part of a headlight.

[stuffbyalex]

Looks a bit like a Vector. It's got that aerodynamic, pointed shape.

Wheel spokes look a little sloppy, and the rear wheel is ALOT bigger than the front.

Alex

[crazy_boarder_dude]

yes i know its sloppy i sketched it in approximately 5 minutes:P now how could i make the front look better plzzz help!!!!!!?!?!!?!?

[Ra_15]

Ummm, did you read my post? I actually don't think its that bad. You should now draw it again bigger, and with more accuracy and detail. Also, you should decide how the car looks, not us.

[AnsisK]

Originally Posted by Ra_15

Looks like a Corvette back, McLaren F1 middle and Lotus Elise front!

WTF!!! LOTUS ELISE FRONT?!!?!?!? What are you on dude??? There is no Elise WHATSOEVER in the front of that

Really though, I don't htink you're thinking of the right car...


Sorry bout that dude. I have a lil' suggestion that has to do with how you hold your pencil. Right now it seems your drawing very tight. You don't want that (for now). You want to have a lose arm, lose wrist and lose hand, You want the car to flow through nice and even. Now you have little lines. Just loosen up!!! Ask some other people on these boards. I can't emphasize this enough. Loosen up!!! Right now, not only is that effecting your line quality, but it is also effecting your design. Like mentioned, it looks like a Vector. That car is terribly outdated. Your design needs something fresh, something modern and new. You've got most of the basics there, just keep loose.

At this stage of drawing skill, the ONLY way to get better is to draw a LOT! Just keep drawing cars, anything at all. Idealistic designs are the best because you keep your options open well past the point you;ve started. Your not restricted in any way (yet). Keep drawing.

Oh yeah, did I mention, keep loose!!!

[crazy_boarder_dude]

hey AnsisK thanks for the comments yes i was veery tight when i was sketching this out n i was not loose at all but i started drawing the real thing now n its lookin better thanx

[Ra_15]

Ansisk, sorry wrong Lotus. I meant Esprit. Im right there arn't I? I do know my cars btw, I just got the names mixed up lol. Btw, just saw your signature (on your drawing) Crazy boarder, it looks cool!

[crazy_boarder_dude]

well thats not mi favorite signaturei cant decide about a good one mi name is too long
Bartlomiej Tuszkiewicz... yea its huge eh???