my toon......azteck?

[castback]

This is the azteck that i was going to put in the tuner contest. I rushed on it so it turned out like poop . This is my first toon style car. There is alot of mistakes put please tell me where i need practice. It will help me in the future.









p.s what is this smilie doing?

[tweak_hp]

umm...ur pic looks nice...i'm not good so i can't contribute a lot to constructive crit....but the smiley is calling people a loser by making an "L" on his forehead

[castback]

thx for the comment and thx for clearing up the smilie thing, but there has got to be something that doesn't look right to you.

[KustmAce]

its pretty cool as a cartoon...if you were going for realism, then u have a hefty list comin your way. If u want something to practice on, try working on your wheels a bit, they seem a little unrealistic, and way to far back on the chassis.

otherwise it looks pretty good, youd have to get Kartoonz' opinion tho

[SeeTheSkyline]

I agree with KustmAce
But you might want doors to get in the car.
mabie mirrors?
if you want

-Andrew

[castback]

Yea i know i never realy finished it but i ment not to have mirrors

[SeeTheSkyline]

oh ok, but yea get kartoonz opinion

[KARTOONZ]

Hi ya castback , nice toon , what to work on ...here we go ..
first it's a toon right so exagerate the heck out of it , start with bigger wheel wells taller and larger .second make your wheels bigger much bigger. Chop the top slightly more , maybe add a big rear wing , they always add to the pic , add bigger air ducts ...remeber its a toon so you want things exagerated , dont exagerate everything but pick out things that you want noticed or to stand out . like wheels, spoilers, air ducts, or maybe an outside hood mounted tachometer . see what I'm gettin at ? Try this on another drawing using the same car you already drew . If you still need help I'll try to draw one for you. Hope this helps ya bro .

[castback]

thanx for the ideas every1. i drew another toon today in special projects art. it is the barney five cop car up on three wheels. i will post when i get some color on it and can use my girlfriends scanner.

[acoustic]

go for it. yeah, the car would look even better if the backend didnt stick out as much, but you still fixed up those weird aztecs.

dan