somethin quick

[cszakolczai]

tell me what you guys think, drew it during math class

Chris

[0tobe60in10minutes]

your perspective looks pretty good, except for the windshield. a like the wheel skirts to, keep it up man

[Mshkttck]

a little sqarish for my taste, but it's great for an in-class sketch

[cszakolczai]

Thanks for the comments, and yeah the rear windshield looked a lil funky, and the squarish design... to tell you the truth, not sure why I didn't round it off. But I have some more drawings that I will post later.
Thanks,
Chris

[KustmAce]

Looks like a new school Citroen 2CV

[NewCarDrawing]

looks like a C6 to me

[cszakolczai]

heres somethin else I drew, tell me what you guys think
Chris

[knightvision]

Both your drawings look very citroenish, like Tim already said. Probably it's because of the hidden rear wheel. The second one has also some TVR lines in it, you know, these wide bows a nd long curves. Maybe you try to combine it with some sharp edges to make it look a bit more interesting.

During the designing process, think about the shapes and surfaces you want to give the car, not only the lines. This will might help you to make the car look less edgy.

Also I noticed the many perspective lines you added. They make the sketch look more professional, but you must care to make them vanishing in a single point. In the second one, they look almost parallel to each other.

The first one is better than the second one imo. only thing I'd mention is the front roof section, it's quite narrow compared to the roofs rear end.

Keep it up, I guess you can improve soon.

[cszakolczai]

thanks for the response, still trying to improve everyday.
Chris