Heres couple drawings

[vwman]

I drawed both in 10 minutes. I know the cars are a bit crooked.



Tell me what you think of these quick drawings

[Ra_15]

Not too bad! Like you said there a bit crooked (the first one more than the second). Just imagine a point in the distance that all the lines must point towards, like when you do 2 point perspective. The detail isn't bad for 20 mins on both . I'd like to see you spend longer on your drawings though, so you can get the perspective right and the shading a bit more detailed. Also, use plain paper, unless that was for a grid method.

Overall pretty good though for the amound of effort . Keep it up.

[lemorris]

Sketch a little more. Move your lines until they look right to you then go in dark.

Do you actually own a VW? I need to know.

[vwman]

Originally Posted by lemorris

Sketch a little more. Move your lines until they look right to you then go in dark.

Do you actually own a VW? I need to know.

Yep, old Golf 2, even im 15 old

[lemorris]

Nice...I own a '58 ragtop named Mistie.

http://www.58vw.com

I used to own 2 fastbacks a '66, and a '70.

Spend some time just drawing boxes. Use it as a warming up exercise, it will help your perspective. Also look through the Al, and bonzelite threads there's good info on perspective in them.

-Lemorris

[vwman]

Originally Posted by lemorris

Nice...I own a '58 ragtop named Mistie.

http://www.58vw.com

I used to own 2 fastbacks a '66, and a '70.

Spend some time just drawing boxes. Use it as a warming up exercise, it will help your perspective. Also look through the Al, and bonzelite threads there's good info on perspective in them.

-Lemorris

Okay.. but i didnt care of perspective on these cars, they were just and only quick draws. But you'll see some more serious drawings soon...

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

looks like theres another vw fan...

im really looking forward to seeing sum serious drawing

its cool that you drawed them in 10 min each

[bonzelite]

good non-serious sketches.

now do some serious sketches that have care for perspective applied.

good job.

[vwman]

This is more serious sketch. I drawed this in hour.

[HighOctaneNOSUser]

Isn't bad just a bit stretched and the perspective is still off a bit...

[SeCrEtMoDdEr]

yeah, you drawed the front bumper off. it stick out too far and it look a little stretched...

looks cool tho, keep up the good work

[lemorris]

Reminds me of myself back in the day. Your tires brought a tear to my eye.

Stay loose, don't rush to color. You have potential. I can see it.

-Lemorris

[bonzelite]

car looks pretty good. tires, though, need to be "DRAWED" better.

where are you from? is english your second language?

[you]

Spend more time on your drawing i think..

untill they look right to you..

[bonzelite]

actually that car looks really great. the biggest qualm i have is with the front wheel --looks cut or fractured or compromised or off-looking, out-of-round. a flat spot. disturbed, stunted, squashed, mashed, incorrect, problematic, distended, handicapped, bruised, rough, misaligned, ill-conceived, unsatisfactory, dumb.

otherwise, you grasp pespsective quite well. wheels are the hardest thing and the first thing to distinguish a car and it's lines.

rock on.