first attempt at anime

[lostprophets]

this is a character from a video game.... i took my own screeen shot and drew this from it.......

[metal]

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[lostprophets]

i see.... well besides that, any crit?

[KustmAce]

a bit generous on the upper abdomenal region eh?

and i reiterate...niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[AirAllen01]

not sure...the picture don't show up for me...just a red x

[lostprophets]

Originally Posted by AirAllen01

not sure...the picture don't show up for me...just a red x

sucks to be you
you're missin out
just kidding
hahahah

[lostprophets]

http://images.cardomain.com/member_i...40_50_full.jpg

if you cant see the pic use the link

[Jeep_Rubicon]

nice, keep it up

[castback]

looks good. only two problems i see

1. you should have used computer paper if you were just gonna do it on one with line (or just trace it onto computer paper before/if you color it)

2. is it just me or does she have a huge bulge?

[KustmAce]

Originally Posted by castback

is it just me or does she have a huge bulge?

Me--><--My mind's eye

[tokes99]

Without seeing the original I can still tell you did a good job, from what I can see is
1) the arms are a bit long
2) Her stance looks akward
3) It looks as if you did not really care about the character's hands---easily one of the hardest body parts to draw acurately.
4) she does seem to have huge bulge, camel toe??

Other than those things which are minor it is pretty good.
What anime do you watch?

[AirAllen01]

Well, from the angle of the body, the arm that is bent has a long upper arm, bring the elbow up to match the angle across the body. The closer boob is a little flat on the side, might wanna round it out a bit more. On the hands, give each finger a sharper bend, if you look at your hand when you put it in your pocket that way look at where your fingers bend. On the bulge in the pants, curve that line the opposite way and make it meet the middle line above where it meets the third line. On the good side, you did an excelent job on the eyes and the face. Very anime like

[lostprophets]

Originally Posted by tokes99

What anime do you watch?

i watch any anime i possibly can...... i drew this from a screenshot from a video game DOA3, hitomi is the character's name if you want to look at some pics you can probably google search it......... i've never tried, i just take screenshots (pause the game at the right time...cheap and effecient) i'm probably going to color one..... if i can find some decent colored pencils