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Old 04-17-2009, 03:02 AM
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Re: Auto Poster--Art Deco style...

the chrome "SALEEN" competes with the entire image for attention

do something to fix that

is your drawing about the chrome letters or the car? right now the car is rendered well, and the SALEEN logo is a cheap afterthought. Also the quality of the rendering of the chrome f/x is inferior to the quality of the rendering of the car. It doesn't match.

also the yellow type is not only unreadable, but doesn't match further the design.

to create a true Art Deco homage, study the typefaces of that era on poster graphics and you will see that they are very elegant, not cartoony and chromed.
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