[bonzelite]

a common error that i even make --faces are too long. eyes are not that far above the mouth area. especially girl on left. eyes way way too high up the face. get an anatomy book for artists and study facial proportions. and girl on left, shoulders too narrow. girl on far right is much better, though. even with cartoons, anatomical proportions must be somewhat heeded because here you have made realistic looking females. you did not draw snoopy comics or southpark. you are doing a sort of quasi-anime style.

keep going.