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Old 09-16-2004, 06:50 PM   #3
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Re: another attempt at song-writing... critiques please?

2nd verse:

Never could tell what you wanted with my abide
The world seems so dark when you see it through my blind eyes
I wished and I wanted I always believed in you
It was foolish of me to place all of my trust in you

first part of revised chorus... still working on it:

Oh, I wish that tomorrow would come
and take all of our fears away
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