[bonzelite]

uuuuhhh. what is up with those fingers? are they broken? the drawing is pretty damn good otherwise.

a rule of thumb (hehehehe): oddly or mishapen or badly drawn hands on people are distracting.

if you cannot fully mimic the photo and present what is there, then take artistic license and avoid drawing a strange version of the photo. even if the fingers look like that in the photo, it does not translate to the drawing convincingly. so abandon the fingers. or revise them. pose your own fingers in a better, less awkward way and use your own hand as reference to fix the picture. go ahead. you have permission to do this.

another rule: oddly or mishapen or badly drawn elipses on cars are distracting.