Blazer W.I.P

Another commissioned work.

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Wow, great start, capturing lots of the lil details.

Tone and shading are coming along nicely, however, I think your rear wheel/tire requires a rethink.

The rim itself should be reworked and more eliptical (it's looking rather wonky...as if it's hit a rather large rock, while off-roading). As well, the contact patch where the tire meets the ground, whould be going to the same right-hand vanishing point as the rest of the body. Currently it appears to follow the cast shadow, throwing the perspective off.

Also, the top of the windshield currently has a slight concave curve to it, making the roof look as if it's been rolled. I'd rework that and make the curve slightly convex to solve that visual problem.

Hopefully my critique is not being too harsh, but rather constructive.

Cheers!

~BG

^ Thanks, I know I haven't done much work on the rear wheel because I'm rushing that part, but for the roof, there are roof racks on top of the car, so it seems a bit weird from the picture. I'll look into the windshield, I think it's the picture that makes it look weird.

wow, now thats my kind of drawing! lookin sweet

Looks great; however, as you say... rushing on the back tires... don't... it's too good a drawing. Looking forward to seeing finished product. Robo

Done! I just noticed I missed something and the shadow for the antenna is wrong. >_< Other than that, I'm happy with it.
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