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Dx_king91
10-01-2007, 06:08 AM
http://mypixnet.com/cms/images/rsgallery/original/9e7a9ecd94362614e60631e803eef449.jpg
I don't know what I gonna choose between these two car so anyone have any ideal:)

drunken monkey
10-01-2007, 12:37 PM
I'm still seeing the same car with different details and as far as I can tell, all you've done here is graft on some AUdi R8 style details onto that same car body shape.

You really need to learn to draw your cars in different ways and to actually think about real details. Obvious things would be the wheels and the cabin.
Let's see some elevations, some plan views some proper 3/4 views.

I keep saying this not to be mean but because this is what would be expected from you if you were doing a design course. If you showed me all of those drawings and said each one was a car design, I'd fail you. Of course, you are not a design student and perhaps more importantly, you not my student so take in what you want from what I say.

Seeing the interior is a nice touch but what about the doors?
This leads back into your lack of real work in the body shape. Because you don't have a definite body shape, you won't have thought about panels, or body structure and so, you can't do anything more with the interior because the doors and the glazing and the A and B pillars all depend on having a proper body design.

You might want to read through this (http://www.carbodydesign.com/archive/2006/06/16-alfa-romeo-villa-d-este-design-story/)

Dx_king91
10-02-2007, 01:24 AM
I see your point I try to IMPROVE myself

rexsins-art
10-02-2007, 01:38 AM
hey dx i think you draw well ,you have a nice natural flow to your work ,i think with some practice copying real cars you will improve heaps as your already a good drawer :)

Dx_king91
10-02-2007, 01:53 AM
thanks man I try not to copying any car

mycorollas
10-02-2007, 02:00 AM
yeah i have to much influence from real cars to try to design some myself

i have no imagination :(

rexsins-art
10-02-2007, 03:21 AM
me too mike im not much of a designer myself ,ive never really given it a go ,i prefer to modify existing cars or reproduce existing ones

drunken monkey
10-02-2007, 05:04 AM
one more thing.
what size are these drawings of yours?
when a drawing is small, it tends to look better than when it is big.
That is why year one design students are more or less forced to work on A1; so they can't hide details. It forces them to think about everything because there is so much paper to fill. On a big piece of paper, you have to draw things cleanly and you have to draw in detail.

Dx_king91
10-02-2007, 09:35 AM
I draw in the A4

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