eclipse concept&BMW

Here's another concept i drew the other day, it took me about 4hrs.O' and let me know if im posting 2many pics to fast
C@C please

I was inspired 2 draw this one after see a new eclipse, and seeing how my shoes fold
http://i3.tinypic.com/w0ntvm.jpg
just drew this from memory nothing inparticular
http://i3.tinypic.com/w0npg0.jpg

Here's another concept i drew the other day, it took me about 4hrs.O' and let me know if im posting 2many pics to fast
C@C please

I was inspired 2 draw this one after see a new eclipse, and seeing how my shoes fold
http://i3.tinypic.com/w0ntvm.jpg
just drew this from memory nothing inparticular
http://i3.tinypic.com/w0npg0.jpg

Nice... good perspective...
Maybe, just a bit too "deformed"? Or you wanted this effect?

the eclipse looks more like a muscle car , cuz of the grill.

thanks for your comments guys
Maoundo: i wanted the eclipse 2 look kinda odd and like have a two part body, but if your talkin about the bmw the back looks wierd because i ran out of room
thanks

Wow i love the first one!!!!! i gotta try some pencil rendering soon.

good job mate, keep up the fantastric work! ;)