Buick Rendezvous

Hey guys. I'v started this Buick Rendezvous yesterday. I must say i'm pretty satisfied with the results so far. But i'm having difficulty making my coloring smooth.

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/518/randezvous6ex.th.jpg (http://img30.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randezvous6ex.jpg)

My pen drawing, barebones


and:

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/5366/randezvous805gu.th.jpg (http://img30.imageshack.us/my.php?image=randezvous805gu.jpg)


Now i rly need honest opinions. I need some suggestions on how to improve. If its possible, i would like a rating on 10, 10=perfect

I am using colored pencils. I dont have markers yet. I used a permanents black marker for black spots.

I think it looks really good. The lines are a bit wobbly, but I think what you need most is Contrast, just really dark shadows, and white highlights, it seems too flat on the sides.

great overall, though. :thumbsup:

good job, but id agree with mshkttch on the flat looking sides, odd choise of car tho lol i give its a 6 1/2

I actually like this car, i own one :P . I like drawing unusual cars

Theres the car almost done. I can't seem to find a way to render the wheels :-( any help?

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/7564/rendezvousrender3ke.th.jpg (http://img63.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rendezvousrender3ke.jpg)

Good contrast, dunno about wheels tho