C12S and SV-R

can someone help me with markers please?
i am bad at them and have had a drawing to test my marker skills, and they are bad and i need help.

C12S
http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/8677/img01064au.jpg

MG SV-R
http://img419.imageshack.us/img419/4310/img01106my.jpg

can anyone help me????? please?

Hi Chris, nice drawings! the pics aren't the best quality, but from what I can see they look pretty good. Sorry I can't give you any marker tips... i got a set for Christmas so I'm still playing around with techniques and experimenting. I don't really know them that well yet. Keep up the good work.

Alex

much better than I could do with marker :smile:

Good job my friend, i like how you colored the MG.

Try to make overall proportion lines on the paper, make points and lines as guidelines, don't go into details too fast. Maybe that helps for your perspective.

ok, the perspective isnt much of a problem, i sort of rushed it.

Couple things on the C12S... The perspective at the front is a little excessive, it should be more in sink with the right side. Also, on the back it end extends too far out from the wheel well. ALSO, sorry, but ALSO the rear end of the of the canopy(?) Side window is too long. That is all, for now.

the c12s was supposed to be a cartoon, but drawing a model car is new to me, its hard to keep it still

Yes but even as such, it still has perspective errors.

Can you show us a better shot of the green skyline in the background?

marker effect has a lot to do with markers, not always how you use them. i use tria markers, which blend into each other, come in 288 shades etc.. they're the ones to use, but they're expensive at £5 each. anyway, if you can get them they're the ones to use.

the green skyline in the background is knightvisions drawing he sent to me