Nicecar Designs MODE

I have done some renders of a car by markers, but something seems to be off, can you help me out?

my "shine" is bad.....

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3838/catacat6fd.jpg

C + C, and i need help with colour!!!

well, the car is kinda boxy, the windshield is too narrow and way too back. The back is pretty well done, the front part makes this car less good i think

ever tried a grid or something?
//Emil

Chris, your design looks good, but I noticed a couple things that are making the proportions of your car look wierd. On the front view, the windshield should be extended to almost twice as long to the right side, which means the hood on the right side comes back way too far. On the rear view, the bottom edge of the rear bumper is going at a different angle than the other parts of the car (leads to a different vanishing point). The bottom edge should slope up more towards the left side. Other than that, rendering is pretty good. You're improving alot!

Alex