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Eband00
08-15-2005, 10:49 PM
Hey guys, i just started this prototype. Is there anything i can improove before shading?

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7318/xenon8va.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=xenon8va.jpg)

g00eY
08-15-2005, 11:48 PM
the roof line is a bit off with the front of the car. you know what i'm talking about? the rear of the roof isn't drawn parallel to the bumper line. you can fix this by moving the right side point of these lines down. kinda hard to describe, but other than that it looks great!

stuffbyalex
08-16-2005, 01:31 PM
Nice idea. A couple things before shading:

-the front part of the wheelwell and the furthest side of the front bumper should slope down at a more vertical angle.

-as gooey said, make sure all your lines are parralel.

Alex

Nannis
08-17-2005, 04:52 AM
Nice! yes the lines..

Eband00
08-17-2005, 02:03 PM
hmmmm, i can't seem to know what line to fix... could anyone help me?

GirlBear
08-18-2005, 11:04 AM
Ummm I don't know what to say. looks alright to me . Very different

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