First ever

Hi everyone, here's my first ever shading of a car. In the first picture, to smoothen things up, i used a piece of paper, and made quite a mess. In the second one, I didn't repeat the same mistake and ended up with these,

http://img208.exs.cx/img208/5990/scan00031rj.th.jpg (http://img208.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img208&image=scan00031rj.jpg)

What do you think?? Oh, yeah, I ran out of paper on the right side!!

Yet another thing, there were school notes on the otherside together(words appearing) with a few other sketches(intakes,....)!!!